Wow, twist ending. The one thing that made me not give it five stars was the format, I found it a little clunky, and the changing of the words halfway through each section made it a little tricky for me. I loved the story though! It was very dark :)
I do suggest maybe using less passages, and maybe switch to twine? Otherwise the story was very good.
Gonna be honest, it's dark. I think a good kind, but this will sit on you a little heavy. I enjoyed it, and would recommend to others, just keep in mind it IS NOT pg.
