Willa undergoes a strange situation. She is trapped in an endless nightmare that makes her die so many times. Will she make it out of the nightmare or will she be trapped forever in the loop?
It's nice, I loved reading the paragraphs and the ending is good. Though, I would have liked it to be a little longer and have an ending where she makes it out.
It's OK, but I don't think people like reading thousand character paragraphs, and with many grammatical errors. The paragraphs should be MUCH shorter, and the dog breed, weapon selection, ect. don't affect much. In time loop games, the player must feel in control for them to work, but in this game, I don't feel in control AT ALL, probably because there is only ONE ENDING. I know this is your first game, but it still is bad.