The Walking Dead Season 1 - Episode 1 - Beginning Of The End Demo by Freddy Fazbear V3RM

Review MrPikmin16

Fake reviews are a no-no for me.

Plus, I thought that TWD story by HarjKS that you one-starred was much, much better.

Comment Alex Warren

I've deleted the fake reviews which the author added (I can tell from the site logs).

Comment Freddy Fazbear V3RM

I posted this on several forums...I did not create multiple accounts.

[Note from site admin: Yes, you did. Don't do it again or your account will be deleted]

Comment Frostedge

SivD1, I think you might be on to something. Seeing as nobody in the Uncategorised category gets that many reviews on the very day the game is posted, it already strikes me as odd that there are five 5-star ratings that were created in rapid succession and on the very same day.

The one review that claims 'Could use some help in Gameplay' has not diminished the 5-star score despite the flaw that was mentioned. To be added, the review from "shrekt" says the intro was 'a little bad but good' yet hasn't diminished the score either, showing that these reviewers have absolutely no sense of quality or competence when it comes to delivering proper criticism.

Special mention goes to the fact that the accounts: "coryyouabusta" "billcipher111" "pedoguynextdoor" "shrekt" and "cleanshit" have only one review attributed on their person, which is a 5-star review on this story.

Honorable mention goes to "filthyshit", who posted a 1-star review. One may have noticed that the name of the 5-star reviewer "cleanshit" bears a striking resemblance to the name of that 1-star reviewer, which is a red alert and a clear sign something is up.

So, Mister Fazzbear, have you either made separate accounts to upvote your own work, or did you invite your friends to help you buff your story's score?

Comment SivD1

Looks to me like the author is making sepearte accounts to up vote his own work...

Review SivD1

"You then hear a very loud scream.

"What the fuck was that?" Stephen asks.

"That was a scream!" You answer."

Sorry, I just had to post that, made me laugh pretty hard.

Anyways, review time. I see you have a story to tell, and I'm sure that the full episode will explore it deeply, but the demo didn't really cut it for me.

It got off to a bad start with the opening credits, to be honest. Though I don't see a problem with you doing them, I would rather you put them at the end, or possibly just make it one long line of text describing every credit. It kind of turns people off when they have to click continue over and over again (especially at the start!)

It's a demo, so I won't judge the amount of choices or the length. I'll be honest, Stephen seemed like kind of a dick for the time we've been with him. I don't mind having un-likeable characters in the series (especially in one such as The Walking Dead), but having a major character that you start off with (in this case, your brother), is a bit of an odd choice.

However, I didn't spot too many grammatical or spelling errors, so that's always a plus (though for the full version, I recommend going back and revising a bit). Also, the next time trailer was quite interesting, and seems that the full episode might hold some promise (whether all of the situations will actually happen, I will have to find out for myself).

Anyways, ok demo, but I'll check back when the whole thing's out. Good luck!

Review GJ

It's kind of annoying when you always have to press "continue" on the beginning, but the rest of the game is really well done. The "trailer" on the end makes me want to play whole game. Good work!