The Escape ( UPDATE NEW V.3 ) by Evan Wong

Have fun! More coming soon!

V.3 UPDATE

NEW UPDATE INCLUDES.........110 MORE PAGES, AND CHAT LOGS STARTING AT PAGE 50!!!

ILLUSTRATIONS COMING SOON!

WE ALSO HAVE A WEBSITE NOW http://lolventures.webs.com/

(Note, this is not supposed to be a game, it is actually suppose to be a web comic, illustrations are coming soon.)

DO NOT CLICK THE LINKS FAST, IT WILL SAY THE PAGE OPTION IS INVALID

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Comment HardkoreezPL

06 Jan 2013

"You slowly move down the hallway, ready for anymore turrets. Suddenly, an alien troop tackles you. He knocks your gun out of your hand and hits you in your face.

NINJA TIME

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Comment Craig Dutton

20 Oct 2012

"Error - 'Page31' is not a valid option for this page"

Sums it up better!

Comment Corey Everett

20 Oct 2012

Jay summed it up rather nicely. No choices, really. Seems like it was made in half an hour. Use better grammar, too.

Comment Jay Nabonne

19 Oct 2012

My initial impression: the player basically has no choices. At each step, you have a single option to take you to the next. It's a bit like reading a story step by step, but with no real player interaction. If that's what you want, then carry on. I just wanted to say that some might be a bit disappointed with no decisions to be made. :) (Perhaps the "more to come" is some branching?)