It's good, but I have issues regarding the text:
1. Small amounts of spelling errors.
2. When using the first catching breath option, it says syntax error.
3. Frequent crashes when picking some options.
Overall, good game!
It's really quite good!
Your writing is descriptive and thoroughly entertaining, and the scenario adds a lot of flavor! It's refreshing to see a new game on here that isn't a basic WIP, so that's a plus aswell.