A Mother's Love by HidingFelix

Review by BeautyvsAshes

This was really good! A great first attempt. The story was interesting enough to keep me engaged until the end. A well-written text game. :)

Review by Crispin

Good job! No spelling or grammar mistakes, effective storyline. Simple, straightforward and quick to play. It could be expanded a little more.

You could make the descriptions a little more detailed, have more things to do with all those random items to make it a more complex and longer game, and develop Bobby's side-story, but it was well done. Talking to the corpse made me laugh.

One thing I noticed was in your description of the entryway: "You can see the staircase, the main bedroom where Mrs. Harris was murdered, and the living room. a Staircase."