A New Beginning by LovelyLexi

A new beginning...not exactly the way you wanted it to turn out, but whatever works. Many choices, many endings. Created by Alexis Angelin M. May not be suitable for anyone under the age of 14.

[SPOILERS]
Starting off as a criminal in custody, you decide it's time for a change. With the help of your 'prison friend' Sal and the pure will you have stored away, you're able to escape jail and be a free man once more... that is, if you survive. Where will your path lead you next?

PLEASE comment your game ending, rate the game, or post any suggestions and constructive feedback you have. Please note: The game is still in development (W.I.P) and it's first complete version will be released soon! (Current version 0.8d - 1/9/17). Comments and feedback are accepted, and your ideas may be put into the game! If you're looking for something more command-based and surreal, check out my brand new game, "A Long Road..." - http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/dicu7kpu1k6fzujsu40v7g/a-long-road
31 May 2017
I pretty much just had to follow the story throughout most of it. There wasn't a whole lot of freedom for action.

19 May 2017
the music goes good with the game and so far i got ending 1 and 3. TOTALLY LOVE IT!!! :D

Comment LovelyLexi
06 Jan 2017
@Slim Shady: Thank you so much for your feedback. Just remember that I haven't forgot about this site and may get the game completed soon.

Review m75075w
14 Oct 2016
not interesting

Comment Awesomeozner06
07 Sep 2016
It was pretty good till the buttons stopped working

Review JubioTEXTDX
07 Sep 2016
I thought it was rather interesting but i soon found out alot of the later on decisions and outcomes seem to be the same, regardless of what you say.

SPOILER

Like when you get the hammer it says you hide it in your uniform like sal said regardless of if you asked or not. I was looking forward to a ending where you get caught acquireing it because of hesitating to put it in your uniform. Also on a different subject entirely theres no text after you decide to go west while escaping... Still I like it, just a few issues though that didnt make me want to keep playing. I currently have 3/5 endings done.

Comment Slim Shady
27 Aug 2016
Very nice, I got shot when I tried to run for it. But I like your writing, it's clear and most importantly grammatically correct (I was kind of expecting a lot of typos and bad English from online sites). Great job.

Comment LovelyLexi
23 May 2016
D: Nuuu Sal! And yes, so far Go West is still the end. Luckily, the game will be updated sometime in the future!

Comment RYOLIGHT-SAN
22 May 2016
Wait so Sal doesnt escape D:

14 May 2016
Close to the end (I THINK) i pick go West, but after that nothing happens and i have to restart and even when i do it wont work so i guess go west is the end?

Comment LovelyLexi
30 Apr 2016
Announcement: So sorry. And thanks to all for reviews and comments. I'll try over THIS weekend and following week to add some more content to the game.

Comment mokoroBOSS
04 Apr 2016
there is an easter egg though.

Comment conpanbear
30 Mar 2016
As of 30 March 2016, this still hasn't been completed (still suddenly breaks at Go West to main entrance.

26 Mar 2016
SO good I thought it would be boring But I was wrong also In the end when I clicked Go west nothing showed up

Comment joaoimperfect
17 Mar 2016
Great game,loved the soundtrack

Comment LovelyLexi
05 Jan 2016
@suchmeloncholy Passenger - Let Her Go

Comment suchmelancholy
05 Jan 2016
what song is playing at he back?

Comment Elite Tech
03 Jan 2016
I found the easter egg!

Comment LovelyLexi
01 Jan 2016
@BeggerStager The game is still in development and has this dead end. Within a day it should be added to the game.

Comment BeggerStager
01 Jan 2016
Could you fix the link where you go west? I went E and the guard stopped me, which left with the only choice to go W, but it's blank.

-Go East
As you go East, you notice a prison guard approaching you looking a bit confused.
Prison Guard: "Hey, uh, Larry is it? I know you're new here and all, but wondering the yard probably isn't a good idea. These prisoners can be pretty dangerous."
-"Sorry. I'll get back to work."
Prison Guard: "All right, then."
-Go West

Comment LovelyLexi
31 Dec 2015
@thatguy2470 Thank you, your suggestion was implemented! :D
@XanMag It is currently what I'm working on. Near the end, most choices will have different effects on the outcome (there are/will be five endings).

Comment XanMag
31 Dec 2015
Well written. It's just a shame it is very linear. Add some choices that effect the outcome and I think I'd quite enjoy it.

Comment thatguy2470
31 Dec 2015
suggestion: in the storage room, you should make it where u find guard uniforms, and u use them to sneak out.

Review thatguy2470
31 Dec 2015
best game ever! Never thought a text game could get so intense.

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