I liked it a lot even though it was rushed. I like the name redfur but the name does make me a little sad because I think of redtail if you knw who im talking about. I like the opening picture and I like to look at all of the warrior cat projects that are new and encourage those new authors :) Nice tory and Im glad I was abled to catch that bird and the fact that you made waterstar sound like we were in riverclan or something.