Warrior cats by Warriorcat_●▪

Comment FernStone

Okay! thanks for telling me :)

Comment Warriorcat_●▪

Disclaimer: This is old and I won't be doing a remake of this because I was new and I didn't rush it. But it looks like I did.

Comment FernStone

also maybe for starters since we are both beginners could you read mine and tell me how I did. The game is called Warrior Cats ThunderClan! but just in case here is the link

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/maojjgjufkylkipmpwxhfg/warrior-cats-thunderclan

Review FernStone

I liked it a lot even though it was rushed. I like the name redfur but the name does make me a little sad because I think of redtail if you knw who im talking about. I like the opening picture and I like to look at all of the warrior cat projects that are new and encourage those new authors :) Nice tory and Im glad I was abled to catch that bird and the fact that you made waterstar sound like we were in riverclan or something.

Comment FernStone

I like your start but I thik all of them are a little rushed. is there a reason for that because its ok to tell because I alreafy rated it 5 starts anyways. Just some advice is that you really shouldn't rush things.