Can you survive a Dystopia? by cutecats2005

Review An Anonymous Skakoan

Pretty good. However, it's really short.

Review 00Finch

Really short. Not worth the time it took to load the header image.

Review MTaylor

Short but with some work this could become something. I like it, it has a nice vibe to it and has a lot of potential in it, keep developing on it.

Review Linx123

Very short (... the ski-phi I'm not here (((
This is a small episode that has to be in reality and the quest is not very developed ((

Comment Regisblackgaard

cutecats<b>2005<b>.
obvious.

Comment cutecats2005

Thank you for giving me such good ratings Regisblackgaard-but where and when did you learn that I am in 6th grade?

Review Regisblackgaard

I liked it a lot and it has lots of potential. However, try working on it more...YOU"RE IN SIX GRADE! you probably have lots of time to do this so yeah.

Comment Regisblackgaard

I'm older than you by 1 year, and i'm new too. Just a tip: make multiple accounts.

Comment cutecats2005

Also, by the way, if you're a fan of Lindsey Stirling, just telling you that I went to go and see her latest concert'brave enough'. If you have no clue whatsoever who she is, she's a dubstep violinist, and I highly recommend looking in to some of her stuff.

Comment cutecats2005

Yeah, about that. As I said I'm kind of new here so...I'm just learning to write in second person still.

Comment flysquirrel775

You have a nice idea going so far. I like your dystopian idea, but as of right now this story doesn't explain much of the player's environment, setting, etc. If you are going to continue this story, please include something more than the armed organization in the story. Nice starting project, and why doesn't anybody write using Squiffy anymore? Everything is a quest game now :D

Comment cutecats2005

By the way, I do not need any new story ideas, but thank you for the offer. If I do I will most certainly let you know ChazCliffhanger.

~cutecats2005

Comment cutecats2005

In response to: ChazCliffhanger,
Thank you for commenting. Yes I agree, it is very short. If you have time please read the beginning of the redo as I have not finished it yet. It is in the work in progress section.

~ cutecats2005

Comment ChazCliffhanger

Very very short with a win/lose question as the second question. I think it has potential, but it is going to need quite a bit more to it. If you would like story ideas let me know!

Comment cutecats2005

I am also going to be making another choose your own story, that is hopefully more exciting. I am currently in school at the moment however so updates will be slow. Check it on weekends for updates. Also, as for comments, please, please, please, please, do not comment mean things. As I said in the description I am new to this website as well as new to writing in second person. Constructive criticism is welcome. Thank you! : 3