I like what you did. The music, the atmosphere, the pictures. They're all very nice, however, I would have liked to be able to get a story with a man other than our savior from the beginning. From the description, "choose your love path" seemed to imply that there would be multiple chances.
"You get eated by the baby ender man you die." That is an improper sentence in SO many ways. It's a nice idea, but it could have been done MUCH better.