Lost Dog by Claire6129

Review ajryan318

the dog was so cute at the end of the story. but dont let the cats eat you

Comment ajryan318

that was awesome

Review CreateAnAccount

This was waaaaay too easy m8. 1725...

Comment CreateAnAccount

You aint gonna find it dumbass.

Comment Pipper

OMG LOL I did it perfect the first time and I kept on playing and there wasn't any other way! If you ever add on to this plzzz make more ways to win!

Comment Nutjitzu

Is there ANY WAY AT ALL to live? I mean, besides the cats. I keep on dying, or getting my face blasted off, of getting eaten by a gator, or drowning, or some other mishap that leads to a horrible death. Poor little puppy...

Comment Nutjitzu

Augh! I got eaten by a croc and have a feeling i'm gonna meet some rats next! OMG! I luv this game! The puppy is sew cyute! Unfortunately I keep dyiing. Sigh*
Good game anyways! :-D

Review Nutjitzu

Awwww! Adorable!^-^
I love puppies! Great job!

Review CraftyKat

Some misspelled words, a very adorable puppy. It's fun and mildly entertaining. Better than some...

Comment alora

Poor puppy! Is *SPOILER* running from the cats the only good ending? If so, :( Chihuahuas are small enough they can be eaten by cats. Kinda sad.

Review Marzipan

This had a plot and some descriptive writing so that alone makes it better than a good percentage of the gamebooks on this site. But the pictures could have lined up with the text better, and you've got some misspelled words sprinkled around though (repeated uses of 'riffle' being the most glaring). And look, I'm sorry, but I think I'm just going to have a policy from now on of just automatically trimming a star of hyperlink games that kill you over and over and don't at least provide a 'go back' link.

That said, I don't want to discourage you, so I let me emphasize again that the writing was pretty decent, I felt bad for that poor puppy having so many horrible things happen to him!

I see you have a lot of games, I'll try and check out another later.

Review honestly

I loved the idea! Very creative!

Review Tom C.L.

A great idea. I was eaten by rats.

Review AxeEcliptica

It's cute, however picture placement is kind of annoying and takes away from the experience. It's cute though, like a children's book.

Review NoGoodNamesLeft

Haha, this is great.

Review Paper Asssassin

Great Game! Love the theme, and cute story too.

Review MooCow

I liked it, and I didn't find any bugs.

Comment Claire6129

Well Siddi, I appreaciate your honest oppinion, but I dis-like text adventures because I find it a bit confusing to make, I always seem to mess up.

Comment Siddi

I need to be objective, that's all; I give better ratings to longer games, and I usually subtract a star from game books, because text adventures with a parser/command line offer a better feeling of interactivity (and the programming affords more logic thinking). Don't get bored with your projects; instead of abandoning them it is sometimes worth to revise or extend them. Many text games were changed drastically in later releases.
In my view it is better to create a small number of great games instead of a great number of small games. But I can only speak for myself.

Review Siddi

It is a cute story.

Review medusacascade

eh. The ending with the cats was disappointing and didn't make me want to play more.

Review buttER

It was alright but not very engaging.