Great ideas and I like how you include quite a few different options, I am honestly testing different games out as mines a WIP. If you ever want tips or advice just ask me and I`ll freely give you anything! I think your game so far is great and will be great when fully finished! -Mint_Berry
Great creativity and detailed writing; however it could do with more choices. I think that it will be a big hit for any other WC fans and it does already have great storyline in just the first few paragraphs alone. I could see the author/creator of this really improving and it would be a delight to play a finished full version or even one with some more time to come; as I believe they will construct a great game from their ideas. Great work and I highly suggest you try it out!