Right away the game is creepy and interesting making me want to click 'continue'. As you progress into the game it gets darker and more gruesome there where some parts where I was thinking
' Whoa!' I applaud you for that.
Explain who all the people are because they kept poping up and I wasn't entirely sure who they where. Maybe describe your surroundings more because at some points I wasn't so sure where I was or what the space around me looked like.
At the beginning it is someones birthday, who's birthday is it? When you chase after Mat I think you should question him instead of just walk away. The ending was both painful and amazing making me want to continue. I found this game really fun with a couple errors. I would very much recommend this game It was Shocking, scary, gory, and interesting .
"The Cruise of the Dead" Is a captivating story with twists and turns with each choice, the 'title' I find to be very intriguing, as soon as I read it I was locked in, ready to play. the story starts off immediately with some mystery and curiosity, making you wonder what's about to happen?
There are choices to choose from right off the bat, which i liked because It caught my interest right away, but are some grammatical errors and links that seem to be in the written text that shouldn't be there. I love the pictures they fit with the story very well, but i think moving them up a bit would make the sentences neater so they aren't cutting into the text. Instead of saying ' bad guys' I recommend saying criminal.
It is unpredictable which is one think that makes the game very intriguing. It is very creatively written and I kept wanting to see what happened next. Just a couple errors, but overall very fun and would recommend.
' The soul of shadows' is a AWESOME name! great descriptive language, you know exactly where you are and what appears to be around you. REALLY fun definitely recommend!
