Elliette Le humanity

Reviews by Elliette Le humanity

Review for The Hunger Games
14 Mar 2024


This author represented confidence and creativity throughout the game they demonstrated big brains! One thing that I think could be better or improved is less talking about the carachters overall recommend 4.6 out of 5
(5)

Review for Fang-pocalypse
13 Mar 2024
Fang-pocalypse is a fun and interesting game. This game has a creative concept. I like the choices of words the author used, The paragraphs were very creative. A few points of improvement I would like to bring up is, that if the author were to edit or create another game Would be more organized, meaning that the sentences in this game would be incomplete or run-on. The introduction of the game was super confusing with the sentences jumping from different parts to other parts making it hard to follow. I also feel that the sentences and the paragraphs could use some more editing and review. I think this game has great potential to get traction. This game has lots of creativity and I would overall recommend this game to peers! Fantastic job!
(3)

Review for The
12 Mar 2024
This game is super interesting with lots of creativity. The language is very well written and is organized very well. One thing I wish the author would include is more images and more juicy wording. This game is super well-planned. If this game were to be edited or the author were to make another one I would advise the author not to make the paragraphs so long. I see lots of great potential in this game and believe it will get lots of credit and recognition. Overall I would recommend this game and I will be playing this a lot and often checking for updates. Keep up the great work.
(5)


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