lil.ollie

Review for Choice of the Dragon

its really good, but i cant figure out how to impress a mate lol

Review for Warrior cats

PLEASE FINISH!!!!! its really great so far

Review for Warriors: Sheepkit's Quest

PLEASE FINISH!!!!!

Review for Warrior cats game: Moonray clan part 1/3 { on hold, editing, sharing, and love always welcome though}

I thought it was amazing! there are a couple grammar mistakes, but other than that, its really good so far. I love your clan names, btw. I also really like your story line, but its a little confusing because a lot happens. otherwise its really great and i really hope you finish it, i would like to see the ending. :)



suggestion: press enter after a few lines when your making a long paragraph so it doesn't seem so long.