lil.ollie

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Reviews by lil.ollie

18 Apr 2020
its really good, but i cant figure out how to impress a mate lol
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Review for Warrior cats
14 Apr 2020
PLEASE FINISH!!!!! its really great so far
(5)

14 Apr 2020
PLEASE FINISH!!!!!
(5)

I thought it was amazing! there are a couple grammar mistakes, but other than that, its really good so far. I love your clan names, btw. I also really like your story line, but its a little confusing because a lot happens. otherwise its really great and i really hope you finish it, i would like to see the ending. :)



suggestion: press enter after a few lines when your making a long paragraph so it doesn't seem so long.
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