Fun and interesting, I wish it were longer. Kind of weird, but in a good way. A little disappointing since it's so short, honestly. But good either way.
Confusing. It seems somewhat promising, possibly, but there were no distractions and laughs to be had by me while I made my way to London. It was not obvious how to get to London, and I was unable to get there without clicking on the hyperlink. The figurine, computer, and TV are all incredibly pointless. The food for sale is even more so. Adding some better descriptions and actual lasting distractions will help immensely.
Very poor writing and fake choices. The choices do not really change anything, since they are almost exactly the same. Also, attempt to scale down and rewrite your writing.
Really, really, really weird. Very short, though that's not a major problem for me. Could use a few grammatical corrections, but mostly it is just a rather odd story. It would be fun if there were a few more endings, and your actions really did anything. There's no way to really do anything within the story, and thus it is really not a game and more of a story.
Great game; really short, but hilarious and entertaining. I felt like I was actually listening to the narrator and purposely kept going for the box because I loved his/her annoyance. So I won on my first try :)
