Travelers Beware by Claire6129

You get to choose where you want to go, but every place has their advantages and disadvantages. Please know that these places do not exist, and that this is just a game.
Though this game tells people that you should allways check out the hotel online and never just wing it, because being prepared is being orginized, and being orginized is being smart, and being smart is being healthy.
11 Jan 2017
could have been a good game. But failed to follow through, as they say in the basketball business.

Review CraftyKat
08 Aug 2015
Sure, it's short. Sure, it's a bit disappointing. But I believe that this could be a very good game if it was longer. Just add on to your choices and BOOM! Five star game!

I had a bit of fun with this. Come on guys, it wasn't THAT bad, was it?

Oh well. I guess everyone has an opinion.

Review TEXT
12 Aug 2014
Short, and not too great. It's just not that exciting.

Comment Kamaton999
19 Apr 2014
Well Then you'll only get better from here on out, look at it that way

Comment Claire6129
19 Apr 2014
Yes, this was my first. >:(

Review Kamaton999
15 Apr 2014
This was just straight up lazy. Which really sucks because this idea as a shit ton of potential if you just flesh out the scenarios for the islands. Escaping a doomed island with nothing more than whatever you packed sounds freaking awesome! And so does hunting down a wanted criminal! But they can quickly become lame if the entire story abruptly ends after a two choice dialog option.

I don't know if this was you're first try and if so sorry for being so harsh but this is the truth. If you're going to keep doing these try to least put a little depth into the story or at least make the choices somewhat unique?

Comment Claire6129
29 Dec 2013
There, fixed.
Thank you a lot for being specific, maybe now people will play and rate.
Please tell me how you like my other games and tell me if you find any other flaws to fix.

Comment Claire6129
29 Dec 2013
Thank you Ereth, I wish people'd be more specific, because I didn't quiet understand.
Thanks, I'll fix that.

Comment Ereth
28 Dec 2013
Pale pastel text on a white background IS hard to read. My eyes are decent enough to deal with it, but it's still a poor design decision. If you want more people to play your game, you need to make sure everyone can read your text.

Comment Claire6129
22 Dec 2013
What???
No it isn't!

Comment Reidolol
22 Dec 2013
Its hard to read.

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