Memory Path by Claire6129

Sandpit
Quest Gamebook
You wake up in a white room with no memory.
Choose a door, any door!
Play online
Review Jesse Richardson
11 Jan 2017
I am a HUGE fan. This is the epitomy of your writing. Unfortunately most of your writing is bad, but this one is HELL DARN GOOD, in the words of one miner in the 49'er gold rush.
Review uthbees
23 Apr 2015
It was silly I like it a lot
Review Tom C.L.
03 Jul 2014
That was really funny!
Review dudeguy
11 Feb 2014
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
four stars for you sir
Comment Ereth
01 Jan 2014
I haven't played this game yet, but you won't get any better if you take constructive criticism so personally. Even tiny spelling errors can make a player less immersed in a game---and in addition, they make you look like you don't care enough about your work to polish it so that everything is the best it can possibly be.
Comment Claire6129
01 Jan 2014
Ok, first of all, Crispin, boiling was a tiny mistake! You can't expect everyone to be perfect. Second of all, I have absolute no idea what you mean with "go easy on the exclamation marks"? I looked over it, I barely got any! Now for the rest you said, I understand. But please don't correct people for tiny mistakes like boiling with only one "l", alright?
Comment Crispin
31 Dec 2013
A couple comments: "boiling" is spelled with only one 'l'; and go easy on the exclamation marks. Also, integrating a storyline or a puzzle into this game would be nice. While it is well done for what it is, there is very little to solve, which makes this piece less absorbing than others on this site.
Review Reidolol
09 Dec 2013
Still a little confuse but is ok.
Review infinentvariables
09 Dec 2013
nice game ;-) even though u gave me a bad review to a game i worked hard on
Comment Claire6129
07 Dec 2013
HAHA!
I DID IT!
Try again, I fixed it!
Comment Claire6129
07 Dec 2013
Oh, yeah, that…
I'm sorry, I just don't know how to!
Comment Claire6129
07 Dec 2013
To me, that's mean.
I made it the simplest that I could!
Comment Reidolol
07 Dec 2013
Its so confuse when hyperlinks his named as page2 example
Comment Claire6129
07 Dec 2013
For a second game, it's great!
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Written by
Claire6129
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Quest Gamebook 5.4
English
Added 07 Dec 2013
Updated 07 Dec 2013

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