Pain Labyrinth by Tai

Comment Tai

Oh wow look at how immature i was a year ago. lol.

Comment Andrew Trewin

"I would kick ur ass in halo 3 lol"

I seriously doubt that :D

Comment Tai

Well, im sorry for all the mess. To you i may just be three letters (t-a-i) but i have feelings! (lol) anyways, atleast my games decent. Ive seen some really bad games here. But ill take your advice steve when i make another text adventure. I just wish there was a site for mediocre text adv. creators where the standards are lower. While you must kick arse at text adv. i would kick ur arse in halo 3 lol.

Comment Michael the gamer

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Review #5 Comment by Tai
30 Nov 2007

steve- i appreciate u not rating it and all (cus it would probably be like a 2) but can you say something positive? Do you just feel like complaining about every single game someone makes even if their new at making these games? You only even comment nicely if its some pro game maker whos crazy good, which im not. And hey i make mistakes, so dont be so harsh. I'm sure when you started you felt the same way.

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Reply:
Same...
Thats what happened to me when I comment on one of dther99 games (called Escape- Boring) and I game it a star rating 3
I thought that was funny because it was a bit lame but then ...
Steve lingle came in and made a non-positive comment on my review.
and made this forum
http://www.axeuk.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=1776
I found a bugs:
If you navagate you may will find youself going around in circles
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Rewiew #6 Comment by Steve Lingle
30 Nov 2007

Hi Tai,
Hey a 2 is better than a 1! But sorry if I sounded harsh. There's just been a barrage of games that are either riddled with errors (spelling and game errors) or they aren't even completed. That's why I started posting comments (seemingly negative) on those games. When a game is well made, or "crazy good" as you said, I certainly do make a positive comment and a high rating.
I think what gets me is that people make and post games that have little or no descriptions, most spelled wrong, and have tons of errors that make it unplayable. You'll see something like "You are in Big Room". That's a simple example showing that the gamemaker didn't bother to use the prefix "the" in the title of the Big Room. Sometimes the exits are screwed up where you end up getting yourself trapped and when you look into their code, you see there was no solution to get out of a trapped room.

Mistakes do happen and even the best gamemakers ma

Comment Steve Lingle

Hi Tai,
Hey a 2 is better than a 1! But sorry if I sounded harsh. There's just been a barrage of games that are either riddled with errors (spelling and game errors) or they aren't even completed. That's why I started posting comments (seemingly negative) on those games. When a game is well made, or "crazy good" as you said, I certainly do make a positive comment and a high rating.
I think what gets me is that people make and post games that have little or no descriptions, most spelled wrong, and have tons of errors that make it unplayable. You'll see something like "You are in Big Room". That's a simple example showing that the gamemaker didn't bother to use the prefix "the" in the title of the Big Room. Sometimes the exits are screwed up where you end up getting yourself trapped and when you look into their code, you see there was no solution to get out of a trapped room.

Mistakes do happen and even the best gamemakers make mistakes but if it's your first game and you know it doesn't work right, don't post it on here and expect to get happy comments from other people. Honestly, this is probably the harshest I get and it's really not that bad compared to other reviewers I've seen. So take that as a positive.

Let's see. Something specifically positive. I don't recall a lot of misspellings so that's a positive note. I really didn't play your game long enough to find a lot of positives. It seemed fairly random walking through and when you are less than one minute into the game, you die by an explosion that came from somewhere else in the maze. I took a look at your coding and saw that you made use of the timers. I knew that while playing the game but I saw how you had them set up. My suggestion would be to give the player a warning that they set off a ticking time bomb and give them an option to get away or at least stop the bomb somehow. The issue in this game is that if you stumble into the room and see the bomb, you can walk all the way to the other end of the maz

Comment Tai

steve- i appreciate u not rating it and all (cus it would probably be like a 2) but can you say something positive? Do you just feel like complaining about every single game someone makes even if their new at making these games? You only even comment nicely if its some pro game maker whos crazy good, which im not. And hey i make mistakes, so dont be so harsh. I'm sure when you started you felt the same way.

Comment Steve Lingle

Nick, you bothered to save? Some rooms say "if you reached this room, you're sure to die" and some say that a ticking started. Even if you're many rooms away, you'll die in an apparent explosion. I considered doing a little map but I don't think I'll bother.
By the way, in a pitch black room, I was able to read writing on a wall without the aid of any light. I'm superman!... or a raccoon with night vision.

Aren't you glad I'm not rating these?

Comment Tai

could you please tell me what the bugs or glitches were so I could fix it and possibly make it longer?

Review satanspooge

It was buggy and really short. Sometimes things like the screen wouldn't even show up, and the man would give me the knife and it wouldn't even show up in my inventory. Once I got everything to work it took me less than 5 minutes to finish.

Review Nick1

IT WAS very good especially with all the floors and rooms. It had a lot of puzzles. Since you could die I had to save. If it weren't for that glitch though, I would have kept playing.