Ditch by Pip1

You wake up in a ditch.

So, it's my first gamebook. Huzzah. Mostly story-based, I tried not to make it too linear, and like most first games, it's pretty short. Please tell me what you think!
Review iwillbegentle
23 Jul 2015
The black background hurt my eyes a bit but that's not a big deal.

I was intrigued more and more as I went along but the game ends right as I started to get into it.

I liked that there was a replay button at the end though, it made multiple playthroughs much easier.

Review asldalf12
25 May 2013
Really good game. I liked that there was also some comedy. Just either please make it longer or make a sequel.

Comment Corey Everett
11 Dec 2012
It seems like this game hasn't been proofread well, and searching through your pockets somehow teleports you to the edge of the slope. I only ask that you fix these.

Review Corey Everett
11 Dec 2012
Somewhat short, but a very interesting world idea. I kept winding up in the hospital. You should really make it longer. Great game though, and thanks for the review on my game. Even now, you earned your 4.

Review Jay Nabonne
05 Nov 2012
I enjoyed this. The writing was engaging and occasionally funny, and the ideas were intriguing. You've set up a world that I'd like to explore more. So my only complaint is that it's too short. :)

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