ELSE SCHOOL by 20tryjoh

ok. this is my first game, I will update later. I was originally going to code this onto a TI 83 calculator, but I broke, so I had to find an alternative. I made this because I loved the orphanage (a minecraft map) and wanted to make a game based off of it.
Review by Scarlett Phantom
26 May 2016
Um... The whole thing was rather confusing. Who am I? Where was I going? Why are there ghosts attacking me? Why did a school, with absolutely no idea of who I am or what I'm doing, allow me to enter and eat dinner with them? Why didn't I notice any ghosts? I didn't know I was hungry enough that I became stupid and unobservant. Why are there ghosts in a school? What kind of school is this? Why can I just run anywhere I want to in the school?

There was no actual story. You start out with a flat tire and then a ghost appears because you don't know how to change it and you run away. You enter a school, eat dinner, and almost get killed. There were very few details (really just the basic minimum).

I just don't understand anything that was being said or done at all. I also don't understand how you code a game like this onto a calculator. And how is this at all related to Minecraft???

This isn't scary. It's not a horror game (unless you count how horrified I was at the grammar, "story," and choices). It's also not finished, which makes the entire thing even worse.
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21 Jan 2016
There are no meaningful choices at all. Don't put unfinished games here. Also no one is scared.
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Review by DarknessPast
20 Jan 2016
Fucking sucks. NEXT.
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