ok. this is my first game, I will update later. I was originally going to code this onto a TI 83 calculator, but I broke, so I had to find an alternative. I made this because I loved the orphanage (a minecraft map) and wanted to make a game based off of it.
Um... The whole thing was rather confusing. Who am I? Where was I going? Why are there ghosts attacking me? Why did a school, with absolutely no idea of who I am or what I'm doing, allow me to enter and eat dinner with them? Why didn't I notice any ghosts? I didn't know I was hungry enough that I became stupid and unobservant. Why are there ghosts in a school? What kind of school is this? Why can I just run anywhere I want to in the school?
There was no actual story. You start out with a flat tire and then a ghost appears because you don't know how to change it and you run away. You enter a school, eat dinner, and almost get killed. There were very few details (really just the basic minimum).
I just don't understand anything that was being said or done at all. I also don't understand how you code a game like this onto a calculator. And how is this at all related to Minecraft???
This isn't scary. It's not a horror game (unless you count how horrified I was at the grammar, "story," and choices). It's also not finished, which makes the entire thing even worse.