Choose your name (selectively, unfortunately!), work your way up the ranks, start your own family, build your destiny! ConchClan used to be an ancient clan that worshipped conches. After being introduced to a clan named IceClan, they changed their ways to match theirs. The clans combined. A civil war had broke out for the fight to keep the clan name. ConchClan won. Now, the two clans live together in harmony, and you’re part of it!
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Pretty good! I know it's not finished, but don't rush. Whenever I do something I don't really want to do, I do a little bit every day. Even 1 page can make a big difference! If you want to make it a little less complicated, I recommend deleting some of the name options. While it is fun, it makes it much more simple to just get rid of some of them, and they're not essential anyway. As long as you have a male and a female, you're fine. Anway, that's all I had to say. Keep writing, I see a lot of potential here!
I like it but I would like to choose my own name since I love being a white and black kit named Poppykit and I would like to choose the eye color of each eye, too. Other than those two things I like it
It was really nice! Tho i would like for you to make an update, because on the female version i couldn`t do anything after the time skip. In the male version it had one scene more than in the female, but it still looked really nice. I can`t wait to see the finished game. Keep out the good work, Bluebarren!
Maybe you shouldn't make it so that it represents the character as 'I'. It makes the universe dry and you don't explore their personalities. They're just... Them. You can't choose if you like Dunekit because they tell you beforehand. You can't choose to say that Beekit isn't spunky and rad, because they tell you that beforehand. You should make it so you can explore their personalities, not for it to just be given toward you.
This is a great game, even if it’s just starting out. I can tell that you put a lot of hard work into it, and I understand how much pressure it is to want to do everything the best you can to make others happy, especially online. This game has much potential, and I believe a great path ahead for it :3
You made a good choice adding so many playable characters, and you have a good storyline. The grammar is a bit off sometimes though. Adding your own photo for the game picture was a good thing to do, it should attract more people! I suggest for the game description that you give a basic description of the clan’s territory.
Also, if you feel overwhelmed at all with all your ideas, write out the story first. Put all the pathways and the major events. It should help you out. You could also ask some people to help you plan and keep the story together.
I hope this helps, and that it was good feedback. Keep it up, BlueBarren. This game has good potential!
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