The Perfect World by Claire6129

Imagine a world where everything was perfect, no illnesses, no ignorance, no meat-eaters, no violence; just simply perfect.
Though everyone is perfect, you have a secret that could get you "given away", you're different.
Though no one is certain what "given away" really means, but if you are "given away", you never come back to Perfect Earth.
I know I spelled a word or two wrong.


GUYS! I FIXED THE LINK PROBLEM!
Just make sure that you double click, and when it is all highlighted, click and drag the link to where the link goes on top. Pretty sure this works.
Please comment if it still doesn't work.
16 Jul 2017
"click this link to continue.." Hmm.

11 Jan 2017
a bad game that no one should play.

Review AwesomeForces
21 Aug 2015
Really enjoyed this, my only fault I can think of , is that it could be longer!
Awesome concept, awesome narrative.
Great job!

31 Jul 2015
Fun game. Quite entertaining and I love the concept.

Review MisterPibb316
01 May 2015
The ending which I assume is the 'good ending' only took me a couple clicks to get to.

Review pey6ton
31 Mar 2015
boring & unoriginal

Review Ranique
27 Jan 2015
Very short no smiles but yeah quite good

Review Tom C.L.
29 Jun 2014
It was amazing, but please fix the error!

Comment Musicgirl20021
09 Jun 2014
It's cool that you added more, but when you click the link at the end it has an error message :/ Even when I typed the link by hand in, it says it has been moved or something like that. You should definitely continue :D Btw, apologize is spelled wrong. Sorry I'm a grammar nazi :P

Comment James Alder
04 Jun 2014
I like the idea. This world makes me feel uncomfortable. I hate every option I choose to conform to the dogma of the Perfect World, but when I deviate I find myself being given away.

Comment Musicgirl20021
18 Apr 2014
This sounds like it could be interesting if you expanded it a little more and didn't have only one or two options.

Comment Claire6129
23 Feb 2014
Please, don't hesitate to rate and/or add comments. (:

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