Monsters by Magic Orange

You wake up alone in a house with no memory of how you got there or what is going on. Upon venturing outside you find a hellish new world where everything you do is a fight for survival.

This is only the first part of the game and I plan to continue it. This is my first game so it my be a little short. I'm still getting the feel for making these.
Review mentlegen
21 Dec 2016
again limiting the choices even if this is a choice game if you pick a choice it wont do anything and you will die that is not a choice game then only if you make a really bad choice then you should die

Comment Raphalion
28 Dec 2015
it´s very good,sooo perfect and funny!!!

Review Ekename
13 Dec 2015
I like this, it's got some real potential, but it feels like it would be better as maybe a text adventure rather than a game book, just for the fact of searching through the mystery house.

Review Mango art
21 Aug 2015
It has good potential, but I didn't like how the only successful choices were to fight. And I felt like you didn't humanize the hoarders enough, I find it unrealistic that they would shoot you for trying to do what they told you to do.

Review DaNiX88
29 May 2015
This is great for your first game! I really liked the atmosphere and progression! It was fairly descriptive, but not drawn out, making it feel very fast-paced! I'm very looking forward to play the next game and see what progress you've made as a gamebook writer.

Try to make the game a little bit longer!

Review MisterPibb316
24 May 2015
Victor summed this one well. It has the feel of a short tech demo that was publicly released as a game.

Review HakuMasarugi
31 Mar 2015
I personally liked the game a lot, and can't wait to play the rest of the games in the series. I really do hope that this turns out to be a long, great game that I could share with my friends. Definite bookmark for this one, though.

17 Mar 2015
Raise your hand if you have ever played a game with this premise: "Almost everybody in the world has turned into zombies. You have to search for weapons, defend yourself against attacking hordes, and meet up with some other survivors because there might be strength in numbers ... if you can trust them."

Now raise your hand if you've lost count of how many games with that premise you have played.

Right. I wonder why people want to remake the same game over and over again. Surely it is more fun to write something with at least some originality? But here we have another bog standard zombie game. It is not helped by bad spelling and writing, by having little content, and by having few if any meaningful choices. Best avoided.

13 Nov 2014
the best of writing, thanks.

Comment causualplayer1
13 Nov 2014
that was great and straight to the the point. I loved it

Comment dogtreatwoofz
07 Aug 2014
I love this so much! ^-^ Its so creative~

Review bloodietoes
18 Jul 2014
The game was pretty good. I liked the choices when you were fighting the zombies. Can't wait to play the others.

Review TheHatMan
08 Jul 2014
Not bad, I liked the choices.

Comment Magic Orange
23 Feb 2014
Wow. 600 plays and 150 downloads. Thanks for playing all of you, and thanks to anyone who is a fan of my games. I'll get back to work on Monsters after I finish Karen, which should hopefully be done somewhat soon. Again, thanks for playing and thanks to everyone who's given me feedback.

Comment Magic Orange
12 Oct 2013
Just passed 300 plays! Thanks to all the players for helping out, this little milestone means a lot.

Comment ErnestJr
27 Aug 2013
My only problem with the game is some grammar issues, I know it's nitpicking but a good game anyways!

Review MAD SPANNER
14 Aug 2013
Very accessible with the short pages and large font, though I was less keen on the sometimes random choices to progress. (for example, two 'Fire' hyperlinks, one progresses, one kills you). It still set up a great apocalypse scenario.

13 Aug 2013
This game capture the essance of zombie- survival. I myself went wondering what to do! This is an ecellent game and I will play more!

Comment Ghost
30 Jul 2013
Loved it, but i would love to see a part 2. :)

Comment al089
30 Jul 2013
Hey, MO, I wanted to let you know that some of your branches are a little wonky, such as 'searching' in the kitchen doesn't allow you to go back to the dining room, and if you choose to call out to the shambling man you have the option to use a pipe that hasn't been introduced yet.

I look forward to the sequel!

Comment Magic Orange
29 May 2013
Part one of the sequel is out now! The name is Monsters: Apocalypse.

Comment Magic Orange
27 May 2013
Working on the second one. I may publish a preview/demo version of it pretty soon.

Comment Magic Orange
26 May 2013
Second one's being made right now.

Comment KeiraChuter
26 May 2013
nice! i personalky enjoyed it. have u made a second part? if so, send me the link :)

Comment Magic Orange
26 May 2013
Please give this a review and give me some comments on what to do better, or just thoughts on the game. Constructive criticism is welcomed!

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