These are just imaginary Clans no harsh words and I know I have a bad imagination shhhh
Clans:
IceClan
RippleClan
ForestClan
DarkClan
Your cat info:
Name: Fawnwing
Clan: RippleClan
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: You create it
Fur color: Cinnamon colored tabby with green eyes. Short tail and two notches in left ear.
Family:
Mother- Birchtail
Father- Silentclaw
Siblings- Wolfpaw, Lightpaw, and Eaglepaw. Her littermate died in a battle.
Legacy Player: The "Play online" link above uses the new Quest Viva WebPlayer, which is currently in Beta. In case of issues,
you can try the old WebPlayer.
The reason for the rating is because its not much but I think its great overall. A few errors you could fix but I can see it being popular! I also have a game and I love to hear your opion of it. here is the link..
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan
not trying to advertise, I'm just mainly trying to get opions to make my game (unfinished) better :)
It was nice at the begining but personally I didnt like it because you stopped at the part where the two cats were fishing, and we didn`t get to know what would happen after. I`d like it more complete and fun, because this isn`t what I would describe fun nor intresting. Just giving a constructive rating here!
I really, really, REALLY like this one! It's so cute, and there's so much potential in it! Minimal errors, differing options with lots of opportunities... It's amazing! :D
Despite quite a lot of work needed, I'm sure this is going to be an amazing game! <3 Good luck!
This is an overall good game- it features good grammar, and unique choices that you can make with each section. I love the fact that you have the option to be bisexual, not just restrained to the common heterosexuality. I spotted a few spelling mistakes here and there, and the average amounts of grammatical errors, so I would say you were alright on that. There are definitely quite a few dead ends, but any Work in Progress has paths you can not go down just yet. A great game, I would say, just needs a little more work to be perfect! Keep up the good work, Gingersong!