this was amazing! I had shivers but I wish there were more endings. I did lay this multiple times though and still had fun.
This is soo cute! if read warrior cats or like that then you can check my game out but in the begining has a bit of whats its about without giving anything away. ty <3
I love how you can have a happy ending and then another where the journey continues. Its like you CAN choose this ending buuuuut heres the better one bc I got another game for you. :)
I think this is very good but I'm saddened by the date of which it was last updated- 2017. I mean it's 2020 here people. If you want to check my game out, or anyone really, here it is. I just updated and I'm almost finished with the storyline and I ask anyone whos sees any mistakes to comment it so I can fix it. Editing is hard for me so feel free to help me out, no pressure though. ty <3
This was really fun and I loved it but I wish it was a lot longer. If you love cats and maybe read the warrior series then here is my game. I'm always looking for people to comment on any mistakes I may have so I won't be offended. I hope you enjoy mine as much as I enjoyed yours.
I love this game a lot and I love that you post weekly, just as I do with my game. I actually just updated my game and I'm looking for editors to help me but no pressure. The more help with editing the better for me, I'm terrible at it, to be honest. Anyway, with all that put aside, I can't wait for it to be update! I've played it a few times even. I'm almost done with my game and I'm always looking for improvements. TY <3
This is amazing! I hope you update soon :'(. If you ( anyone else really,) want to check out my game it's here but It won't even compare to yours! I'm looking to edit it and if you see any mistakes don't hesitate to point it out! ty<3
this has a lot of potential and I played it a lot. I'm sad that you arn't updating anymore seeing as its been 2016 sense you last updated. If anyone sees this or you by any chance, you can see my game here. Made in 2020 and I try to update once a week. Part1/3 is almost done!
I loved this and I hope to see a part 2 very soon! I am a little confused when it was thunderstripe and not thunderpaw and then thunderwing. Could you maybe explain that? Also, my game is here if you want to review/comment on how you like it. I encourage criticism so I won't be offended, I'm always looking to improve. I'm also looking for help with editing the story, you don't have to though.
that's if you want to try it. :) I'm almost finished writing 1/3.
It's soo good! I wish It had more. In my opinion, you can always add more choices that are dire and more choices later on, but what is really important to me is how long you play. If there is a bunch of problems but they all have one page, I bet it would have horrible reviews. But I think It has great potential. My game is here and I just updated it and you are free to comment mistakes and review it.
This was really good! I can't wait for the update to come. I still have editing to do, but I would love more comments, if you have any, about any mistakes. I take all into countability as I edit everything. Reviews are also nice too. Here is a link to my game that I just updated. :) http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan-part-1-3
It was alright, I loved it but I think this could be super good if you update more. In my opion, less choices but more to the storyline is more important but thats just me.
My story is here and the 1/3 is almost finished. I have one or two more updates and then I'll edit everything. Can you check it out and leave a review/comment? ty
It was great but if you add more it be awesome. also, thanks for reviewing mine and I did update imy game sense that. :)
This was awesome! I love it and it doesn't seem that short for how much detail you put into it and the choices. This could easily be one of the top-rated stories. My game is here
Could you review it and tell me what you think? I'm hoping with one or two more updates and work on part 2? thanks and this should get more attention btw <3
please update :0
This was good in all, but it should be finished if not close, it was made in at least 2016... its four years later I don't think shes updating anymore.. but you can check out mine though! I try to update once a week. Tell me what you think please <3
I love this game but it was short. It if was longer than It would be so good! Could you maybe explain why you made another game without finishing your other one? It was good too! Speaking of good games, could you review mine and tell me what you think? ( or anyone really :D)
It was very good! I wish it was longer though. My game is here,
And I want you or anyone really to check it out and tell me what you think. I'm looking to improve and add before I finish part 1/3! thanks, <3 (can you also look for grammar mistakes?)
I can't read the text and its super short. Maye if you fix a few things it is ok. But all the reasons aside, you should read the books, or know about it. My game here ( work in progress) has a description for kinda what happens including on what I added because I believe medicine cats should legally have kits and mates. I update frequently ( at least once a week.) maybe you could check it out or really anyone who reads this XD and tell me what you think.
I love this so much, please finish! Also, could you review my game here
I would like a few opinions on it and how I can make it better.
I loved it but I wish there was more to it like detail and storyline wise. Overall if was good.
I'm writing my own but Its unfished. I'm going to update some more today but here is a link if you want to check it out and tell me what you think. thanks!
You said there was only one way to win, was to get the pearl but you literally have the end for all of them. Is this a troll game or something? You always die and there is not even a mention of the pearl. I've tried literally everything. All of that put aside, it's not bad and I like it myself.
I loved it! I also liked the fact that you told me or us, that it wasn't finished because sometimes it fails to load and it's just my computer. I can't wait to see more, keep up the good work. I'm also creating a game myself and its code as a gamebook.
that's the link if you want to try it out and hopefully leave a review or comment on how I did. thanks!
It is amazing! I played it a couple of times through and although short it was amazing. I want to see the other games but I know it takes a while, maybe you could upload what you have worked on and just update it when you can? I don't know but I'm super excited! I'm also creating my own little game, in the form of a gamebook. http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan
That's the link and I hope you'll try it out and tell me what you think!
I love it! When is part two coming? Also, I'm making (unfinished) a warrior cats story can you tell me what you think?
I love it! I'm currently reading on wattpad now :). could you maybe try mine?
I liked how pretty much all of the choices are at the same pace so you dont have to make sure to choose the ones you've worked on! But it is short. Mine is unfished and recent but can you review it and tell me what you think?
I love it! cant wait to see it finished! my game is here if you want to try it but it is unfinished
too advoid dead links or links that dont work make sure they have a title or it comes up as blanc. If it is just unfished I would put that below the text. Also I have a game That I recently made could you try it out and see what you think? Maybe leave a comment or somthing? ty
I liked it a lot! Maybe you could try mine? I made it about a week ago and its unfinsihed but I update frequently in my opion.
The reason for the rating is because its not much but I think its great overall. A few errors you could fix but I can see it being popular! I also have a game and I love to hear your opion of it. here is the link..
not trying to advertise, I'm just mainly trying to get opions to make my game (unfinished) better :)
I think its pretty good but I agree, you could add more choices and more story to it. You could also give us a choice to live our/her life. Like maybe more toms to choose from or deputy/leader or maybe a loner. But I think it's great overall and at least it's finished. By the way, I'm making one of my own, its called warrior cats moon ray clan. I don't think you can find it just by searching sense it is a work in progress but, here is a link :) tell me what you think please and thanks. http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan
I loved it and how even though annoying, I had to try again it was nice because not it wasnt easy.
I love it but I wish there were more choices and ones that mattered for my taste. I am currently writing a book myself on here. It is called warrior cats moon ray camp and it is not finished yet and I want to add a lot so it won't be finished for a while. If you cant find it by searching here is the link to the page please play and tell me what you think :). http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan
I thought it was amazing but I think that you could have added more, mate wise, kits, maybe more decisions on leaders. I wish it has more detail but I loved it a lot.
I think this is awesome but I had to try a few times, which I enjoyed that it wasn't handed straight to you. I wish you had a choice on your mate with kits or leader but I loved it. It was a little short for my taste but at least it is finished. I am writing my own story and its called, warrior cats game: moonray clan, I hope you'll try it out.
I love the creativity of it but I agree with many others, its very short. I don't think you are updating, but I do have advice for other writers, such as myself. Don't have too many choices in the beginning and try to make at the end at least three choices. For example, my story the choices don't really matter that much since you mainly go to the same place but when I finish I'll keep adding and the choices might matter from life to death, love to hate, and warrior to leader/deputy or even a whole new road as a medicine cat!
I love it but you dont go past the red ruby. Please finish!
The reason for my rating is that, It would be better for less choices, 9 in my opinion,) and more storyline to it. I'm pretty disappointed that not much is added at all. Buuuut go check out my story it is unfnished but I posted it a few days ago and I'm updating as soon as I can. :)
This is a very good first game and I'm actually doing one myself. Could you put/edit and say which ones are completed or which you have done the furest progress in and ones that you havn't done much with? Continue please and I love it <3