Your name is Shawn Dare................... You live in a world full of "walkers"
Now your job is to survive............................................
Or become a walker............................................................................................................................
In a world filled with danger where will you go will you survive the Walking Dead?
THIS is the sequel to episode one of the Walking Dead: survivor
Okay I see where your trying to go with this but it's way to linear and I felt like I hardly had a single choice to myself through the entire story! try adding a little more story to it and maybe a little less non-stop head bashing?
I felt that this part was not as good as the first part. First off, you used the word "quickly" far, far, far too much. Also I was a little confused by the story in this episode, and there were hardly any choices. There was also a dead end in the script if you hit the walker in your old house. It seemed like you might have forgotten the retry link there. Also, and this is likely part of the story, the boy from the end of the first game is never mentioned. If he had died or something like that in the time between games, you should have mentioned it. This wasn't too bad, but it's far from your best work. Still though, the series shows promise.