Karen Part 2 by Magic Orange

Review by MisterPibb316

I continue to enjoy the story itself. I am also pleased that this chapter is a bit longer than the first part. But again, there is a serious lack of interactivity here--a good story that needs much more 'game' to it. Seriously, just a couple more links would've *easily* raised this from a 2 star rating to 3.

Review by TheHatMan

God...I love this story. I can't believe I stopped playing it. After playing it again, it was just amazing. I'm going to enjoy playing the next part (seeing as it is out now). Good work sir.

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R.I.P. Elijah

Review by Archangelus

I'm rather enjoying these stories you write, although I think you need to do a once over for editing, I noticed a couple spots that didn't quite mesh (fairly minor though so its pretty much fine), but mostly I think just make the next one a bit longer and maybe add a few more options, to make it more of a adventure rather than reading through
(on the other hand its good as is, so I suppose either way works lol)
I think this is shaping up to be a neat little story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Goodbye and good-luck
-Arch
4/5

Review by celticblue1994

can't wait until you come out with more sad the old man had to die though