Karen by Magic Orange

Review cutecats2005

I feel the same way as Janlan44. Extremely well written.I would give it a 5 if the link to next part was active.

Review Janlan44

Very good game. Extremely well written. However the link to the next part is broken. If that was corrected I would have given it five stars

Review Happy Hat

This game is great and I've played the monster series and I loved it

Review Jindary

This shouldn't be here. Other parts were made yet part 1 has broken links... I don't understand why so many unfinished games get posted.

Review MisterPibb316

The writing style is straight to the point--it's blunt and doesn't sugar coat the consequences of dystopia, and I appreciate that. There are a couple ways to get a game over, so there is some degree of choice here, but even for a Part 1, this is is very, very short.

The reason for the low rating is not that this is bad, because it isn't. It's just that there isn't enough content.

Comment awsomethingy

"You need to keep moving in case the Pillagers are still around. You make it only a few yards from the bush before a hand falls upon your shoulder. You tense up, and the person notices.
"I aint gonna to hurtcha," he says. You turn to face him. His face is scraped and dirty. He looks to be around fifty years old. He is wearing a tattered, brown duster jacket and torn blue jeans. His undershirt is stained brown and red. His leather boots are scuffed and his thin gloves are ripped up. His hair is greasy and ragged, and his beard is wild, but is face is warm and comforting. "What's yer name?" he asks."

"His hair is greasy and ragged, and his beard is wild, but is face is warm and comforting." Before face it should say his.

Comment awsomethingy

"You and your father had practiced what to do in this situation. Find food, water, and shelter first of all. Then try to find a weapon, and don't trust any people. There are plenty of things that could kill you out here. Wolves, giant birds, bears, mutants, and of course, people. You think finding shelter should come first, then you can find food and water. To your north is a Naked Forest. All the trees are striped of any vegetation, that's why they're called Naked Forests. To the west are some hills, and to the east is a river."

"All the trees are striped of any vegetation..." It should be stripped.

Review dogthursday

Just rating, bc I just played through all 3 of these, looking forward to the 4th installment!

Review SivD1

Enjoyed what I played. It is a little short (though you said that you made it that way on purpose), but it's good from what I've read. NOTE: Broken link on "go with Elijah" and you spelt "did" instead of "died".

Review TheHatMan

Good job dude! I loved this game!

Review RougeShane

This game has downright potential. Its purely amazing.........but it"s only a demo.

Review celticblue1994

please finish this would love to play the whole game

Comment celticblue1994

please finish this game love it

Comment Magic Orange

In case anybody who cares hasn't noticed, part two is out and part three is underway currently.

Review thedarkphoenix42

This is starting off with a great premise and i would love to see more from this. I'll be looking for the full thing!

Review awesomeman12345

THE BEST DEMO I'VE PlAYED MY WHOLE LIFE.
The game gives you the sense of danger at the start and keeps you at the edge of your seat the whole way
a good game but dissapointed because it's only a demo.

Comment Ereth

This seems interesting enough so far, but the choices generally funnel the player into only one possible scenario without much consequence. I also saw some typos.

Most importantly, you shouldn't make a game, or do any creative project, solely because you want positive feedback. There will be times when you'll get constructive criticism that is harsh but honest, and sometimes you'll get panned outright. But that shouldn't make you say, "Well, time to throw in the towel because nobody likes my work."

If you feel something is a worthwhile use of your time, you'll finish it no matter what kind of reception you get. Positive feedback is encouraging, but it cannot be the primary motivator for a project. You'll never get anything finished if you use it as a crutch.

Comment Giggling_Kiste

Please continue this :) Mwhahaha positive feedback, now you'll have to :P