TheBoldWriter

Review for Shrunk

It's a daily good game but the images and the music videos you put in are distracting. The images are too big and can't be seen whole, (at least in my computer) and really pulls you away from the game.

I would love to see more, but please remove the images/videos. For the 'Game Over' scene you can just add a Sound-Effect instead of the YouTube link!

Overall, great work but a bit too distracting...

-your friendly neighbourhood reviewer!

Review for Sick but not bad to down

Yes, yes, YES!! FINALLY A LOT OF GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!! Either the game is supposed to be that way or you're just dumb..... sorry.

This game isn't funny, the only funny thing here is the grammar. WHICH ISN'T FUNNY! And the choices are weird. I can't say anything else...

Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,
No Hate

Review for Job Quest

Amazing, the best I have played yet. I personally can relate to this a lot. Its about the stress and hardships one goes through in his life. 'Every action has a consequence' is the main base of the game. I like how every time the pages change to show that, you've lost grip over everything.

Honestly, an amazing game. A must play. Looking forward for games like this.

Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,

Review for Space Race

Think this game just took you 10 minutes to complete. The game is about 5 inches long and has no perspective whatsoever.

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Review for Beyond the Boundary

GOOD GOOD GOOD! BUT, not Perfect. A few things to note: Short, not so clingy and in more places you don't have a choice. Would be good if you could add more choices and be more descriptive and add a clingy feel to it. Overall, its a good piece but not perfect. It's you're first try though, and for that fact its pretty good. Has a nice but not convoluted story. For that I give it 4 stars.

It has peaked my interest and would play again. Keep up the good work and keep making good text adventures.

Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,

Review for Ryga's The Walking Dead Episode 1

Well, surprisingly good. Though there were mistakes in the grammar here and there, I don't mind. It's a pretty good game after all. I would give it a four because of the shortness of the game, but because of the date you've promised to release episode 2, I gave it a 5. This game isn't bad but it's pretty easy. A few tips for episode 2, make it LONGER. Make it HARDER. And some Audio wouldn't be a bad idea.

Overall, Amazing. Grammatical mistakes but totally readable. Short, but I don't mind. Would Play again in a heartbeat!!

Keep up the work,
Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer!

If it isn't too hard. Could you message me the link? Yes, I'm too lazy!

Review for Nothing Special. (fixed)

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Review for Joel

Okay, so I get it. Just like the usual story. You get up and you don't have a memory. A disappointment because I thought that the whole no memory thing was getting old. This game isn't perfect. Then again, nothing is. The thing I found very disappointing was the lack of description. All the choices lead to one line descriptions. And some didn't have any at all! Many improvements needed until I'll ever play this again. Make it MORE DESCRIPTIVE. Make it LONGER. And add some SUSPENSE. Audio and Visual wouldn't be a bad idea.

Overall, short. Not very descriptive. Usual no memory story. Very boring. Narration not good. Wouldn't play again in the current state.

Review for Best Ways To Kill Yourself!

I have NEVER EVER IN MY WHOLE LIFE EVER LAUGHED SOOOO HARD!!! Amazing game! A big Thanks for making his game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Why not check out my game? Probably because I'm a feminist and I'll kill you if your a male!

Review for Civil War

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Review for The Titanic

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Review for Z.K.A

The Story is good! Nice concept but however, it's not perfect. Firstly, lots of grammar errors. You wrote 'want' as 'wan't' and that's wrong! Then after the 'Quotation marks' the letters should be 'Capital letters'. There was also a mistake of 'They'! But anyway, the story was SUPER short and that's never good. And in the start when you're the guy with the bomb, there should be more then one CORRECT option. I'm saying that because there's no way you can prevent the apocalypse. So I don't think that it makes any sense of only one starting. Also if you'd have added the option that you can either become a 'Hunter' or a 'Watchman' it would be AWESOME!! The game has potential and that's the only reason I gave it 4 stars!
I would be very GRATEFUL if you could PLAY my game and RATE it even if you don't like it, I would learn a lot!
Thanks, and keep up the good work!

Review for The Red Hair

Okay? Maybe? Some haha was present and that was a good aspect. Was VERY simple and that's not always a good sign, even in a game like this. (Spoiler) The clown statue thing was good but there has to be another way the children could die. Like you go down to see the parents coming back and boom dead. If there would be a part where you can like fight or you have a straight encounter with the clown then it would be AWESOME!! Also there was a very minor grammar error after the choice 'Wait and knock again' there was a mistake. It's written "Finally the parents answers" which s wrong. It should be written as "Finally the parents answer". The "answers" should be "answer". Otherwise the grammar is okay. I wouldn't call this a 'Horror' game 'cause... Well nothing scary. Anyway. KEEP IT UP! And MAKE IT LONG!!!

Review for Zombolocaust

Was a pretty good game, music was good and the narration was.... FANTASTIC!!! It felt like I was there! Really Needs a sequel can't wait!


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