It's a daily good game but the images and the music videos you put in are distracting. The images are too big and can't be seen whole, (at least in my computer) and really pulls you away from the game.
I would love to see more, but please remove the images/videos. For the 'Game Over' scene you can just add a Sound-Effect instead of the YouTube link!
Overall, great work but a bit too distracting...
-your friendly neighbourhood reviewer!
It's a amazing game. Almost perfect, aside from the minor grammatical errors. But, I can look over them to see a very short story. It's good, but I'd like to see some more. Maybe add another quest or just make it lengthy.
And add a bit more choices. Because of its simplicity a bit more choices would make it more immersive.
I don't care if you don't, cause even in its current state, it is beyond words. It has a nice concept which would be even better if improved.
Overall, a nice little game, or text adventure. Great touch adding images, now all you need is a bigger story. Would recommend.
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Reviewer,
Yes, yes, YES!! FINALLY A LOT OF GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!! Either the game is supposed to be that way or you're just dumb..... sorry.
This game isn't funny, the only funny thing here is the grammar. WHICH ISN'T FUNNY! And the choices are weird. I can't say anything else...
Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,
No Hate
Amazing, the best I have played yet. I personally can relate to this a lot. Its about the stress and hardships one goes through in his life. 'Every action has a consequence' is the main base of the game. I like how every time the pages change to show that, you've lost grip over everything.
Honestly, an amazing game. A must play. Looking forward for games like this.
Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,
Well, that was uneventful.... Either you're trolling THE WORLD! Or you just don't know that THIS GAME IS SHORT! It say's 'Mystery' and honestly thats very well done. The genre is the right one for this game! 'CAUSE MOST OF THE TIME THE PLAYER IS WONDERING WHERE IN THE HEAVENS IS THE REST OF THE GAME? Either I am missing something really important, or YOU ARE MISSING SOMETHING!! And I'm not talking about the gem.
Overall, I'm speechless in a bad way. There are only like 10 choices? Its super short and is more of a comedy than a Mystery. Only because you're busy laughing at the game... I wouldn't play it again until updated.
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Reviewer,
No Hate....
Think this game just took you 10 minutes to complete. The game is about 5 inches long and has no perspective whatsoever.
GOOD GOOD GOOD! BUT, not Perfect. A few things to note: Short, not so clingy and in more places you don't have a choice. Would be good if you could add more choices and be more descriptive and add a clingy feel to it. Overall, its a good piece but not perfect. It's you're first try though, and for that fact its pretty good. Has a nice but not convoluted story. For that I give it 4 stars.
It has peaked my interest and would play again. Keep up the good work and keep making good text adventures.
Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,
Wow, 100+ plays and no review, YET!
I was just roaming around the site's latest games, and found this. I saw the game before but, didn't play it. Boy, what I had missed.
Amazing game, superior narration and well the whole game is just FANTASTIC. A Audio track wouldn't be bad to make the game a bit more interesting, not that it already isn't. Well, I've said everything I can or anybody else in this case can say. Its WONDERFUL. And I mean it. Though this game isn't perfect. In the sense of 'THE FEELS'. Its a very good piece. Just a tad bit more improvements and you're done!
Keep up the FANTASTIC work.
Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer,
Well, surprisingly good. Though there were mistakes in the grammar here and there, I don't mind. It's a pretty good game after all. I would give it a four because of the shortness of the game, but because of the date you've promised to release episode 2, I gave it a 5. This game isn't bad but it's pretty easy. A few tips for episode 2, make it LONGER. Make it HARDER. And some Audio wouldn't be a bad idea.
Overall, Amazing. Grammatical mistakes but totally readable. Short, but I don't mind. Would Play again in a heartbeat!!
Keep up the work,
Your friendly neighbourhood reviewer!
If it isn't too hard. Could you message me the link? Yes, I'm too lazy!
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Okay, so I get it. Just like the usual story. You get up and you don't have a memory. A disappointment because I thought that the whole no memory thing was getting old. This game isn't perfect. Then again, nothing is. The thing I found very disappointing was the lack of description. All the choices lead to one line descriptions. And some didn't have any at all! Many improvements needed until I'll ever play this again. Make it MORE DESCRIPTIVE. Make it LONGER. And add some SUSPENSE. Audio and Visual wouldn't be a bad idea.
Overall, short. Not very descriptive. Usual no memory story. Very boring. Narration not good. Wouldn't play again in the current state.
Amazing-ly disappointing! I'd love this game if it weren't for the fact that it.... Well, it's just so repetitive! It just won't end, the frustration AND the game that is. You keep dying then awaking realising you were dreaming. Well thats a downer, eh? I just don't understand why there is no way of surviving. Sure, you can kill me but, I should at least get a sense of accomplishment! 10 minutes in and I already started skipping the text! And believe me I never do that. Make it a bit LESS REPETITIVE. Make it BETTER.
Overall, It's good. Narration gives out 'the feels'. Very Repetitive. Very Boring after a while. No goal, sense of accomplishment. Game can never be survived/ you always die. Wouldn't play again, until updated.
A Jolly good game, if I say so myself. Very well narrated and has a good, dark and scary feel to it. But, there's always a but, it's short. Sure it's good, but that set aside there aren't many choices. And it was particularly easy. Just spent like 15 minutes and the game was done. MAKE IT HARDER. MAKE IT LONGER. MAKE IT SCARIER. Try adding a scenario, where you're in the Demon's Castle and it's like a maze. Also a bit of audio, like the baby's cries or something like that would make it even better.
Overall, a fantastic game! Enjoyed playing it, would play again!
I have NEVER EVER IN MY WHOLE LIFE EVER LAUGHED SOOOO HARD!!! Amazing game! A big Thanks for making his game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Why not check out my game? Probably because I'm a feminist and I'll kill you if your a male!
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The Story is good! Nice concept but however, it's not perfect. Firstly, lots of grammar errors. You wrote 'want' as 'wan't' and that's wrong! Then after the 'Quotation marks' the letters should be 'Capital letters'. There was also a mistake of 'They'! But anyway, the story was SUPER short and that's never good. And in the start when you're the guy with the bomb, there should be more then one CORRECT option. I'm saying that because there's no way you can prevent the apocalypse. So I don't think that it makes any sense of only one starting. Also if you'd have added the option that you can either become a 'Hunter' or a 'Watchman' it would be AWESOME!! The game has potential and that's the only reason I gave it 4 stars!
I would be very GRATEFUL if you could PLAY my game and RATE it even if you don't like it, I would learn a lot!
Thanks, and keep up the good work!
Okay? Maybe? Some haha was present and that was a good aspect. Was VERY simple and that's not always a good sign, even in a game like this. (Spoiler) The clown statue thing was good but there has to be another way the children could die. Like you go down to see the parents coming back and boom dead. If there would be a part where you can like fight or you have a straight encounter with the clown then it would be AWESOME!! Also there was a very minor grammar error after the choice 'Wait and knock again' there was a mistake. It's written "Finally the parents answers" which s wrong. It should be written as "Finally the parents answer". The "answers" should be "answer". Otherwise the grammar is okay. I wouldn't call this a 'Horror' game 'cause... Well nothing scary. Anyway. KEEP IT UP! And MAKE IT LONG!!!
Was a pretty good game, music was good and the narration was.... FANTASTIC!!! It felt like I was there! Really Needs a sequel can't wait!
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