The makings of an awesome game but the random attacks get to be too frequent and annoying and the risk system is flawwed, hiding always gets found and attacking rarely gets you hurt. Plus the game is incomplete but gives no sign of it except for (future locations). If it's not done don't upload it or create a temporary ending so people don't waste time going other directions to try new stuff. Also be plausable, a store containing nothing and 1 cupboard containing several items does not fly. Nice try, could be great with working.
Story line is good but the game is not interactive enough and the sentences are far too long between. People want to play games preferably with an involving storyline, otherwise they would pick up a novel. Having said that, with practise you could develop this story into a rather nice little novel that delves into the human psyche as the great zombie stories do.
Great for young children but otherwise a lack of detail, choice and everything involves death despite choices it seems, does not keep the attention.
nice try