I think this is a very good game, good structure, but i must say you have tried too hard and it is easy to get lost :P but anyway, this is brill, nice one i cant wait for your next game!!
sorry, that really wasnt very good at all no description overload of items no plot good effort though and awful spelling what the hell are starirs? anyway nice try
i got stuck really really early on in the game i couldnt understand much of it but quite a lot of thoughts been put into it so good, but not fool-proof