Zurculous by thomas20

This is more of a story than a game. However, since you do pick your path and can die, I guess it's both.

This is Chapter 1 only. Rough Draft, so could have typos/grammer errors. If any errors are too bad and make for difficult reading: just email them to me with location in story.

Have fun! Would love some feedback.

What do you like/dislike about the story?

Too easy/Too hard?

Any questions email me at [email protected]

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Comment norwalis

25 Apr 2014

also 2 note you wrote stay ground 1
and instead of writing just east of town
you wrote
justeastoftown

Comment norwalis

25 Apr 2014

Thomas Could you give me pointers for a good game my email is [email protected]

Comment thomas20

04 Apr 2013

Thanks for the Typo update tino. I've made good progression with the next portion of the story. However, it is a bit longer and extends the story into a somewhat "world view" of this fantasy realm. Hope you enjoy the direction of the story. I am currently a college student and my schedule has been crammed. Hopefully I will finish the 2nd part of the story soon, but I'm more concerned with the quality of the story than just a quick release date.

Alora, I also apologize to you for the delay. If you've been waiting for the next part, I've surely made you wait too long.

Comment tino7710

30 Mar 2013

I only noticed one typo. You didn't spell 'Clothes' right. You spelled it like 'Cloths'. But overall, its a cool story. I LOVE gamebooks.

Comment thomas20

03 Jan 2013

Thank you for the positive review alora. The second chapter is currently under work and I am making good progress on it. I hope you will like where the story leads. The next part will be titled Zurculous 2.

Review alora

25 Dec 2012

cool game. no typos (unless you call the weird monster names typos) that i found. keep progressing it and it can be really good.