B.L.I.Z experiment (part one) by inaboxiscookie

Review by syxxity

Spelling needs to be improved, it's hard to understand multiple parts of it. In a decently serious tone, suddenly the "what do you want to eat" pops up. Considering that it probably took maybe 2 or 3 minutes after the character was just relaxing, I assume they'd have to have eaten.

It's a good concept, but you need to fix a few things. :)