My Little Pony: Friendship Untold Demo by Shadow Rain

This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Incomplete

The game appears to be unfinished, or is a demo of a longer work which has not yet been completed. Once the game has been completely written, it may be re-categorised.
This is the first demo of the game, tell me what you think and what needs improving.
Review by TakingFlyte
19 Sep 2015
I'm very glad to see a brony/pegasister here! But, anyways. The game is of fair quality. There are grammar errors that can easily be fixed, but they don't affect the quality of the game, luckily. The overall storyline is a but confusing. Why would Princess Luna, disguised as Nightmare Moon, be chasing after an OC pony? I found that odd, but the ability to decide what kind of pony you are really makes up for that. I enjoy customization in games. I'd love to see this be continued.
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Written by
Shadow Rain

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HTML Game
Added 14 Sep 2015
Updated 17 Sep 2015


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