Very short and all-over-the-place. You are banished from the Clan for seeing a leaf (what leaf looks like an overlarge shadow sneaking around a tree? How could anyone mistake a leaf for an enemy creature?) which is somehow breaking the warrior code (I do not recall seeing anything about a false alarm warranting being outcast from the Clan). On top of that, your mentor gets pissy at you for hunting for something that would provide a proper meal and refuses to speak to you (which may be due to anger issues but that's some poor thinking right there) and somehow an an apprentice just made warrior manages to defeat the leader of a group of rogues in a "very hard battle" just by... chasing him. Unrealistic, sloppy, and in general poorly made. If you expect a game to take ten minutes to make, you should not be trying to make it. The quality will end up being shitty. Just a word of advice :/
just boring. and your WAAAAAYYYYY to OP in my opinion. what cat catches 5 mice in 1 hunting trip? how do you even cary them all back? also idk if its just my comp or what but i have to keep scrolling up to read it. also;
you: gets paranoid because you saw a leaf and thought it was enemy cat
rest of clan: BANISH HIM! HE BROKE THE CODE! and then the exact next thing is a rouge attack!