Warrior Cats: Path Of A Warrior by CaptThomas

Review by Detective

I agree with my friend, @Here's a Problem, becausse the second passage is unreadable, it's superrrr short.

Review by Misterfox

Seriously could you add a bit more also Cats can hunt rabbits in every clan not just Windclan and your mentor wouldn’t reject you for trying to catch prey. One other thing try update it and make it so you don’t get banished for warning the clan about something you think could be a threat! SO...

Review by scarly woods

I can't read the text and its super short. Maye if you fix a few things it is ok. But all the reasons aside, you should read the books, or know about it. My game here ( work in progress) has a description for kinda what happens including on what I added because I believe medicine cats should legally have kits and mates. I update frequently ( at least once a week.) maybe you could check it out or really anyone who reads this XD and tell me what you think.

Review by Heres a problem

The second text is unreadable, and short.

Review by Txgirl2009

Really short, apprentices do not be one warriors because they are short on them. If you were just a warrior you really won’t be deputy. Work on details more and maybe re read the books to see how they really go.

Review by Warrioroftherainbow

This. Is. Just. Really. Bad.

Review by Luckyflame

This... Is not good. It's short, you can get banished for a leaf, you can become deputy, you can die, and thats it. Becoming a "True Warrior?" Nah.

Review by warriorcatscool

Seriously? By warning the Clan of a potential danger you aren't exiled or, 'banished.' This is very, very poor. I'm sorry, but, come on do you even read any of the books? Or do you just watch stupid videos or listen to like, five seconds of the audio book? ONE. STAR. ( Ah Wind Clan joke)

Review by Swiftthunder

I’m really sorry but this is so. Bad. It’s really really short and what da flip LEAF it is a LEAF. Also, if you warn the clan of potential danger you definitely don’t get banished I mean come on read the books!!!

Review by SilverStone the dragon

Have you even read any of the books?! You can't get banished so easily!