I mean: Of course, it's your first game. My first (and yet only) game sucks too. But at least I put some effort in it! Not to say the whole thing is bad...
But the historical facts are just THAT wrong. Also the German translations are.
My English also isn't the best, but I don't just use Google translate!
Maybe, if you do a second part I could help you out with the translations (German is not my native language, but I guess I can help you out better, than Google does).
Please don't be mad at me. I hope you understand what I think. If you want my help with another game (maybe even the "2.0"-Version of this game!), just write a comment at this game. I'd be happy to help out. :')