These are just imaginary Clans no harsh words and I know I have a bad imagination shhhh
Clans:
IceClan
RippleClan
ForestClan
DarkClan
Your cat info:
Name: Fawnwing
Clan: RippleClan
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: You create it
Fur color: Cinnamon colored tabby with green eyes. Short tail and two notches in left ear.
Family:
Mother- Birchtail
Father- Silentclaw
Siblings- Wolfpaw, Lightpaw, and Eaglepaw. Her littermate died in a battle.
The reason for the rating is because its not much but I think its great overall. A few errors you could fix but I can see it being popular! I also have a game and I love to hear your opion of it. here is the link..
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan
not trying to advertise, I'm just mainly trying to get opions to make my game (unfinished) better :)
It was nice at the begining but personally I didnt like it because you stopped at the part where the two cats were fishing, and we didn`t get to know what would happen after. I`d like it more complete and fun, because this isn`t what I would describe fun nor intresting. Just giving a constructive rating here!
I really, really, REALLY like this one! It's so cute, and there's so much potential in it! Minimal errors, differing options with lots of opportunities... It's amazing! :D
Despite quite a lot of work needed, I'm sure this is going to be an amazing game! <3 Good luck!
This is an overall good game- it features good grammar, and unique choices that you can make with each section. I love the fact that you have the option to be bisexual, not just restrained to the common heterosexuality. I spotted a few spelling mistakes here and there, and the average amounts of grammatical errors, so I would say you were alright on that. There are definitely quite a few dead ends, but any Work in Progress has paths you can not go down just yet. A great game, I would say, just needs a little more work to be perfect! Keep up the good work, Gingersong!
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