What the, Grandpa? by Archast

Comment Niekitty

Not half bad! =^^=
Looking forward to having a bit more to it, but certainly worth keeping an eye on it.

Review Vlosanar

Okay, so you posted this on another site (not to be named) and make minor complaint about having to many 'plays' and no comments or reviews.. well here goes.

The first day feels to rushed. This added to so many dead ends, and the transformation/growth thing felt really forced and out of place.

I hope to see more. I just registered on this site specifically to give you this reveiw so I don't know if there is a way to 'follow' this story.