Welcome to Ponyville by Klondikekun

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***THE MAP STILL DOES NOT WORK***
I'm going to make an ascii version of it some time later.



Game in the works about a pony (you) moving into Ponyville from harse conditions.


Walkthrough for Chapter 1: Finish the introduction and rest on your futon. Then talk to Periwinkle, make your way north (by going east or west) to Sugarcube Corner in the Market District. Go back to where you started and talk to Mayor Mare. Walk back to the Market District and go northwest. Meet Twilight, go visit Pinkie, leave to meet Rainbow Dash. Go to Carousel Boutique southeast from the east district, west to Sweet Apple Acres, back to the east district, northeast to the bridge to the forest, northeast again to Meet Fluttershy. Return home and start the next day.

Things you can do from what I remember:
Cheerilee's first quest
Meeting Zecora
Saving Spike
Working for Applejack
Meeting Big Mac
Meeting Celestia
Meeting Luna
Eating lunch with Celestia (after meeting Luna)
Working for Rarity
Meeting Lyra and BonBon
Comment taboenr2d2
15 Dec 2017
When I went back to the saved game, it doesn't save the progress I made: the bits, the days, only the inventory saves.

Comment Indalecio
25 Sep 2017
Game has no option to load

17 Mar 2017
Amazing 10/10

Review AK1112
01 Mar 2017
I LOVE IT !

Comment DJStarX15
11 Jan 2017
Hey can u update it plez

Comment Kathryn Le Dino
24 Nov 2016
It made me stop on day fourteen...

Comment Heir of Life
21 Nov 2016
Can't wait for update, if there will be one (The last update's date scared me, but then I realized it was all chapter 1, and that hopefully chapter 2 is still going to be a thing, as this is amazing work).
Please do continue to impress me! I love your work!

Review DJStarX15
16 Nov 2016
Very well done I do hope you continue the story and improve upon the things that needs improvement.

Comment DJStarX15
11 Nov 2016
I think I have a bug when i try to resume the story dosn't work

Comment IsaiahStardust
26 Oct 2016
I really hope to see this grow and continue, I enjoyed it quite a bit :D

Comment ~Le Dino~
21 Oct 2016
I saved, now my progress is gone...

Comment stormfade12
21 Aug 2016
game is fun keep it up with the awesome work and hopefully you work out the bugs with the images

Review Coorooo1-1
10 Jul 2016
Nicely done my friend. I do hope you continue the story and improve upon the things that needs improvement.

Review Star396
07 Jul 2016
This is wonderful! It's so fun to play, and it's just so charmimg in my opinion. I can't wait for the next update!

30 Apr 2016
the more I play, the earlier on it freezes

30 Apr 2016
My game eeps freezing and my stats keep not saving

Comment solares
29 Apr 2016
I am having a problem With the game welcome to ponyville. I dont know how to load. I log in. Play the game . Save and it sans sucess. But When i Press play resume i Lost everthing.

Comment darkghostknight
28 Feb 2016
I hope that this is still being worked on...It's really good at least what I've played

25 Dec 2015
It's wonderful. The only things I didn't like was that I couldn't find any way to talk to Fluttershy, and after day 14, it's game over. Even after what the calendar said.

21 Nov 2015
could you add more details in the directions so that way when the highlighted tag shows up it tells you what's there for example: north east , insert location name here (that's where the name of the location would go) cuz I've been doing nothin but goin in circles and getting completely lost
thank you
~Shadow Omega Wolf

Comment necromancerman
10 Nov 2015
Love love love this game, amazing fun and i really wish i could go further in it, will it ever be updated?

Comment StarMender
14 Oct 2015
All of my stats and money seem to get erased if I save and come back to it. I'm not sure if this is a problem with me, the way the story was made or the site itself but it is very outputting to know that I have to finish it all in one go :/

Review Istarian
14 Sep 2015
I tried it. It's not bad, although it feels a little bland and could use some more character. If you can, you should try to be a bit more detailed in your descriptions of locations. They are kinda boring and aren't really good at conveying which direction things are (or at least where I might want to head). It's utterly unclear how to get to Sugarcube Corner and while exploration is a good thing, wandering around blindly because I have no idea where I am going isn't really any fun. It would also be nice if the conversations could be made a little less perfunctory. I.e. the conversations are used solely as plot forces. One other thing is the interaction of the mane six with the character. Rather than each of the six saying something, you should use some of the character generation stuff (in some fashion) to decide which of the characters interacts with you (hopefully at least one) and maybe a brief conversation that may result into talking to one of the others. As is it feels unrealistic and a bit overdone.

Please improve the spelling and grammar! :) The formatting could use some work too... This sort of thing means a lot to the quality/enjoyment of a text game. An significant improvement in this department

I would give this a 4/10. A five point scale isn't adequate since this better than poor and technically okay, but it's still a bit of a ways from good. Improving the stuff I've described (and the spelling/grammar/formatting) would probably bring it to a 6/7 out of 10 in my estimation.

Review Cloud Dash
19 Aug 2015
This is a really good text adventure, minus all the grammar and spelling mistakes.

17 Aug 2015
Just a suggestion, will you make it so we can make our own names? If you do so, thanks!

07 Aug 2015
Truthfully, my rating is more likely 4.7/5, but the site does not allow me to go as much into detail. The game itself is amazing and I love playing it; I enjoy getting into the world and everything feels very nice and well put together.
All around my opinion is positive but my reason for writing this now is actually the straw that broke the camel's back that kept it from being fantastic; the game just has general problems here and there that are mostly small but weigh on me. The grammar isn't atrocious but it has it's faults, and I wouldn't mind ponies having a bit more to say, or even some ponies only having quests on certain days. Perhaps that's remidied farther into the game, but from where I am it isn't. What truly bothered me though is that there was an entire event (one that I was actually excited for) because my game would spontaneously end the day it began.
I was pumped and ready for the Wonderbolts event, but the moment I woke up, I'm told my game is over.

Review pinkydash
05 Aug 2015
Awesome
But bummer map no work I can't wait for updates I love that you can go to other cities and all dat junk awesome hame

Review CraftyKat
22 Jul 2015
I got stuck partway through, and I just kind of clicked around a lot to get where I wanted to go. Anywho..

HOW DID YOU DO THIS?? I wish I could do things like you do. Really. Wow. Bravo!

14 Jul 2015
its a really good game. when i get over the fact that i had to restart twice due to my stupidity... but thats a different story. i found it a good game, although it would be better if it was updated so that it goes on past day 14. also, there is a bug where when you give mr. cake the jar then talk to pinkie pie, you can talk to her multiple times and her relationship with you will keep going up

Review MisterPibb316
25 Apr 2015
Had to do some figurative scratching of my head when considering how to rate this, because there is clearly effort in the narrative and the game's attempt at delivering it (it does so with some redundancy, but we're talking free games here, not something you bought off Steam or whatever.) Most Quest games are over in 5-10 minutes, while this one could take up an hour or more of your time, and I really do appreciate that.

The game abruptly ends at Day 14, which is the biggest issue. Other bugs include a broken map (even though the game apologizes for it being broken) and a black background that blocks some text (though briefly, so it's not a big issue.) I will say that if you're a MLP fan (I don't have much interest in the franchise one way or another--I played this game because it has a high overall rating), you'll likely have some fun with this, even if it's, seemingly permanently, unfinished.

Comment poke-dots
11 Apr 2015

I haven't finished yet, but it's great! I hope the map gets added before I do! It's really fun interacting with all of
the characters, but I wish you could enter your name at some point.

Comment friendlyrosy
22 Mar 2015
im a little confused with the gender since I picked girl but sometimes was called a him but otherwise I love it , its awesome

Review youth44
25 Feb 2015
I love this, and totally wasted a lot of time playing this. The writing is wonderful and it's really addicting. My one problem is the calendar. I get excited for an event, but it just acts like a normal day. Rainbow Dash was supposed to pick me up, but nothing happened. Otherwise, this was a wonderful game. The story line is really cool.

Review Gostindamis
14 Jan 2015
I was loving this game....until the day RD came to pick me up for the wonderbolt :/ man i really wanted to continue! I know this is the same as discord whooves's review, but i had the same opinion

Comment hayden99
17 Dec 2014
I hope you havent given up. this is amazing!

Comment scootaloo2288
16 Dec 2014
I think theres a bug I pick my sex than race and continue and its stuck there each time

Review IamYurWifey
31 Oct 2014
please update

Comment phoenix winter
21 Oct 2014
please update it!!!!!!! its so good!!!!!!!

Comment CuteTeal13
13 Sep 2014
This game is so awesome

Comment Paul21
06 Sep 2014
'You wonder what she means and then you realize, the hat Rarity gave you. You had it on all this time?
"I mean I didn't know torn hats were in style outside of Equestria. It was the first thing I saw." You chuckle a little. '
... I dropped the hat a long time ago and forgot about it...

Comment Paul21
05 Sep 2014
This was really interesting, but it constantly bugged out and didn't give me any option, but that might just be a quest glitch, still, really annoying.

Comment Meganuim64
12 Jun 2014
I'd like to try! But it'll probably look like I broke my keyboard making it. XP

Review CharlieChoski
06 Jun 2014
pretty greAT

Comment yoshiclay9000
19 Apr 2014
lets look at top hat!... no? fine I will go back... no? then I will save and quit... no save? fine I will quit without saving (stupid glitch on textadventures...)

Comment yoshiclay9000
19 Apr 2014
TAKE group of ponies XDXDXXDXD

Comment bronypal
25 Jan 2014
Oh yea I found how to delete day 14 stuff!

Comment bronypal
25 Jan 2014
Well I'm trying to add on to what is already here :P
Its hard XD

Comment bronypal
25 Jan 2014
Well I'll be trying to add on to the gameplay :P
The first thing I need to find out is how to get rid of that 14 day limit that I cant find .-.

Comment bronypal
25 Jan 2014
My reaction at looking at quest making interface: ....This..... Now this is real evil............. *derp faced*

Comment BlazingKritik
18 Jan 2014
1. It's Kritik and 2. ME NO UNDERSTAND QUEST MAKING INTERFACE. Maybe one of you guys could do it. I want marriage and romance, though.

Comment Miss_Rarity
14 Jan 2014
Also to respond to blazing critic, you can actually edit the game yourself quite easily (Even me, someone who knows nothing of quest was able to unlock the game past day 14) All you need to do is download by clicking download to the right, and downloading a older version of quest, then you will be able to edit it yourself and add/ remove anything that you want, i'd LOVE to see this game updated, and while i would be willing to do it, i just don't know how it is done.

Comment Miss_Rarity
14 Jan 2014
I'd just like to say, if you would like to continue after the 14th day, then you can go over to this version

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/idju_fv1ueq8nibn0veysw/welcome-to-ponyville-without-cap

HOWEVER, there is NO content after that part, and, in general, After that part your game will be dull and there won't be anything to do, But if you really want to continue playing, it's a nice way to just look around some more.

Comment kirbymaster1
06 Jan 2014
Comment by BlazingKritik
I would be willing

Review kirbymaster1
05 Jan 2014
A great game to people who wish to travel the town of ponyville. (now if only there was some for traveling the other parts of equestrian.<see what I did there).

Comment kirbymaster1
05 Jan 2014
I really would like to read the ending to this spontaneous adventure, wish you luck:D

Comment BlazingKritik
04 Jan 2014
Dude, if you want to, send one of us the data and maybe we'll finish it for you, lazy.

Review BlazingKritik
04 Jan 2014
I think you should REALLY update it. Like, make it as long as anybody wants. And add marriage....and...EXTEND THE STORYLINE! I wanted to see the festival! And the end of spring! 4 out of 5. FINISH IT.

Comment mlp AppleJack
26 Nov 2013
More please, and I'm not that stubborn about working right?

Comment Carter410
23 Nov 2013
Add moar! This is amazing.

Comment whychong90
19 Nov 2013
i find Lyra quest not complete, she still waiting Bon Bon after complete quest-Hanging with Twilight

Review cheche
09 Nov 2013
Best story i read for a while... rating is a 4 untill game is finished... please finish ;-; will rate 5 when full game is done.

01 Nov 2013
I was loving this game....until the day RD came to pick me up for the wonderbolt :/ man i really wanted to continue!

Comment Myth_Chaser
29 Oct 2013
I haven't really done much yet, but I can tell this is a great game already. The only problem I have is the map. I mean, why not just enable the map feature, so the game automatically draws a map for you as you play?

Review duskshine
24 Oct 2013
over all I love this game but you could add at lease a random name for the ponies call the player

Review bro1094
17 Oct 2013
I found a strange yet cool bug where after you give Mr. Cake the jar, go to Pinkie and click "Speak to" multiple times. each time you click, your relationship with her goes up just like that.

05 Oct 2013
this is a pretty good game, cant wait for the next part

Comment NekoKnight
19 Sep 2013
Come all ready and update the game its been like forever.

Comment Mattthecolt
15 Sep 2013
how did you do the currency

Comment BullPony
14 Sep 2013
It seems that everytime I hit the day 14 mark it says the game is over.... What is going on?

Comment BullPony
13 Sep 2013
does the chapter end on your 14th day?

Comment NekoKnight
07 Sep 2013
It's a great game idea and had potential but the lack of update's it's bring this game down. I feel bad for those who donated there money to making a game that look's like it won't ever been finished. The creator doesn't even update you with status report's. Which would help other's put there mind's at ease, knowing that at least something is being done.

Review StrategyLover
03 Sep 2013
I think the game's awesome, though i tend to like alot... Still, i'm excited for the continuing... If there will be any.

Comment Meganuim64
03 Sep 2013
Theres a glitch where you cant go anywhere but to fix this just don't use the compass use the compass only to back to your original area(but if you have no idea anymore then you're pretty much stuck) then type in: go (north,west etc) that should fix the problem. It is most likely caused by just moving too fast. Anyways what happened to updates? :(

Comment Nornin
01 Sep 2013
Anyone who has any idea where Klondikekun went? It's been over a year since this was last updated.

Comment RainbowDashie
25 Aug 2013
i love the game but it has a weird bug where i cant go any where

Comment NekoKnight
22 Aug 2013
When's the next update coming out?

Comment Tongen
17 Aug 2013
NekoKnight, these games require a program you get on THIS SITE to play offline.

Comment Tongen
17 Aug 2013
Y U NO UPDATE?!?!

Review NekoKnight
07 Aug 2013
Love the game! Though it does need to be longer and have a way to keep track of your relationship's. I hope there will at least be some H-dialog when those relation's reach their peak. Plus, I hope there will be multiple ending's when all said and done. Updates and Progress reports would be great too.

Comment NekoKnight
03 Aug 2013
I'm having trouble saving while playing it online. Is there a way to retrieve the data without having to start at the beginning all the time. I'd download it but it comes up as an .asl file that my pc can not read. If you could change it to a .swf file like other texted based games that would really help. All and all still a great game so far.

Review Brony
18 Jul 2013
Really epic. I've notified all my Brony Friends about this. Swag
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5 out of 5 for sure!

Comment Brony
18 Jul 2013
Really epic. I've notified all my Brony Friends about this. Swag

Review Entropic Pen
15 Jul 2013
This game is good, but not well-done. There are a lot of flaws like being able to talk to your futon, or trying to put an entire crowd of ponies in your pocket, and to the very shoty combat system. The dialogue could've used more work as I've learned that pop-up boxes aren't exactly user-friendly. But the game makes up for this by being ambitious to follow the show and include a lot of familiar characters without using many obscure ones, or over-glorifying just a few.

Overall, I give this game:

FOUR talking futons outta FIVE

12 Jul 2013
Very good and impressive we need some more to do though after you talk to Celestia in the castle and Zecora (not sure if i spelled it right) and get the jar nothing else left to do really. Still good though 5 out of 5

Review Kyle Haeberle
20 Jun 2013
Very well thought out. And very immersive. Can't wait for more chapters!

Comment bronypal
17 Jun 2013
Are you kidding me you took my name?
This Gmail account was started by me before your account was even made.
The name is so stupid it can't be a random choice..... I hate people who copy others names for retarded reasons...
There is the possibility it is coincidental though.....

Comment bronypal
04 Jun 2013
> speak to Pinkie Pie
Pinkie smiles at you when you arrive. "I saw everything! That's to help Mrs. Cake isn't it? Thank you! I really hope she gets better soon!
Your Relationship with Pinkie Pie is now 202.

"But I still have to fill in for her so I can't hang out until she gets better! You understand right? Thank you again though! Oh..Welcome to SugarCube Corner!"
LOL SO AMAZING

Comment bronypal
04 Jun 2013
You would think he would have tried to fix the map before going on and doing larger things? If he is doing more cities, depending on how many he is doing, this could take forever );
I love some of the current fails
> speak to Rarity
"Hi darling! Uhm.. Could you please help me with something real quick?"

You doubt it will be a quick thing.

Applejack looks disapointed. "How are you ever going to get stronger if you keep slacking off?"
What was Applejack doing at Rarity's?

Comment InarJollyhound
02 Jun 2013
So, after a year passing by, do you think you can tell us when the next update is? I am not jumping to conclusions and thinking that the story is dead and won't update, it takes time to work on something as brilliant as this!

I wish I could help out, I would love to see more of this, the internet really needs more pony text adventures.

Comment bronypal
31 May 2013
Does anyone know if this has died I'll be sad if it has :(

Review bronypal
30 May 2013
It caused me to change my mind about being a brony :)
It is wonderful for being a text based thing and I hope it is not dead and will continue being worked on otherwise I'm just going to be sad :(

Comment bronypal
30 May 2013
I played this game and it made me actually become a brony congrats, you have changed me :3.
I hope this is not dead as it really is a wonderful thing for only being text based adventuring.

Review Valorzard
27 May 2013
i don't know what to do in the supermare but pretty much OK

Comment Quester
26 May 2013
Can't you use the map system that you can use with quest?

26 May 2013
Awesome! I can't wait for more! =D

Comment Warrior Kitten
19 May 2013
I save every once in a while, I've played this game 3 times but every time I come back here and click resume it says the game specified cannot be found and continuously says loading...I try typing load but then it says your session has expired. If this keeps happening ill never be able to finish the game. It's extremely frustrating as it is.

Comment Warrior Kitten
19 May 2013
Can't seem to figure out the saving and loading part of the game. I'm on an iPad that's probably why. Anyway, there seems to be hints of certain things in the game. Curiosity is getting the better of me here, but is there any way to have a "relationship" with any of the characters.

19 May 2013
Can't help but notice that saving is a bit glitchy. That might just be that I'm playing on my iPad so that won't affect the rating I'm going to give you. The best I can give you is a 4 seeing as there's still some grammar problems, spelling mistakes and I think, I'm not sure, but I think I may have seen a bug or two.

Review Miniike
13 May 2013
It's a shame that this will probably never be finished, but for what it is, it's a very fun way to throw away few hours. The writing is fantastic and it's very immersive. Great work!

Review Trinity
04 May 2013
This is one of the greatest games I've ever played. It's genius. By making the character never say a name or really describe any detail, the player gets to create his or her dream character. As well as the free roam feature goes, its fun, because it actually simulates moving to a new place, as i continued playing the game, i began learning the different place i could go to, as well as remembering where they were all located. I give this five stars... out of five. I highly recommend this game, and i'm not even a brony. But the way you don't actually have to even know what the show is to understand the characters makes it even better. Can't wait for the next update!

Comment MrNOOBO
01 May 2013
hey were can i find rainbow dash

Comment rainbowdash1011
29 Apr 2013
This game is not awesome it's because you guys have the map and i don't.
Because i can't download it!
Thanks a lot!
Oh yeah i was wondering if you guys know minecraft,it's because the first time i played minecraft i only built a three leveled house in creative.
But then when i discovered what survival was i have only made a house in a mountain and discovered what the zombie looked like it was just like us!
But the skin is green.
And watch in youtube minecraft but if you guys don't know minecraft that's ok but watch skydoesminecraft videos in youtube,he has lots of subscribers like 1,000,000.thank you : )


Comment rainbowdash1011
27 Apr 2013
all of these are just words!
it is also because my father says that"you want to download that but no you can't download that in my account only in yours and maybe there might be a virus"that is what my father said when my brother was trying to download a game from cartoon network and also i can't stop typing comments!

Comment rainbowdash1011
27 Apr 2013
What is happening to the world!
But actually it is my father's fault it is because he did not get a faster laptop this laptop is as slow as a snail and also he did not fix my laptop.
By the way my laptop is fucking broken!

27 Apr 2013
I want to know why this seems to be awesome.
Because you guys think it is awesome but this game is not really working in my place.
So welcome to my world.
This game is stupid.
but when it is working i will say it is awesome like rainbow dash!

Comment rainbowdash1011
27 Apr 2013
i can't seem to understand the typing things so i just copied the thing what it says : |

Comment alex27
26 Apr 2013
this is really cool, I can't wait till there is more!
there is really only one issue I noticed. after I have Mr. Cake Zacora's potion, every time I talk to Pinkie, I gain 3 relationship, so I pretty much have infinite relationship with pinkie!
I just wanted to let you know :)

Comment Miss_Rarity
24 Apr 2013
If anyone wants a version without the cap. i made one... however there isn't much to do after it, as in most of what you did at first will be all that you can do. however if you want it here it is.
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/idju_fv1ueq8nibn0veysw/welcome-to-ponyville-without-cap
(sorry but saves won't transfer.)

Comment ImTheAvenger99
18 Apr 2013
@Miss_Rarity

Well, we don't know if he gave up on it. He is working hard on this and he may not want to update it until it is finished. On the other hand, this may not be ever finished. I really really really really want him to finish this game, it is way too cool to stop now. So you theory still stands, but hey, you never know.

Comment Miss_Rarity
17 Apr 2013
last update was a half a year ago... i have a fealing that he has given this up sadly, it's a shame that he put a cap on it.. i wonder if there is a way to mod it..

31 Mar 2013
This is one amazing game. The only thing I found wrong was the map and some grammar errors here and there. But everything else seemed fine to me. I can't wait until I go to the Wonderbolt Academy with Rainbow Dash. When I saw the game over thing I was like "NOOOOOOO!". But It is going to be so awesome /)^3^(\

Comment legionbrony
15 Mar 2013
When can we have an update? This game is amazing.

Comment Em3
09 Mar 2013
This is awesome.But,when will it be finished?And,when it is,will we have to restart?Or,will it continue where we left off?

Review Mist
05 Mar 2013
This game is good, it's easy to understand, and it generally feels like I'm in the MLP universe. However, with the lack of a map i found myself getting lost every once and awhile, and the grammatical errors made the experience less immersive. But the game is solid and is very fun to play, so you earn a solid 4 stars.

Comment Francisco1
25 Feb 2013
My Enter Key is not working. Is it a bug or is my key bord just being stupid.

Comment Nornin
21 Feb 2013
It's been a while since the last update, is this game still being worked on?

Review LunarGuard12
20 Feb 2013
Very well done! Can't wait for an update to this, I just love text based adventures!

Review Simon11
10 Feb 2013
Very intresting conversations keep it up

Review Nova Eclipse
10 Feb 2013
PLEEEEEEASE update soon! I don't want this game to be abandoned! ;A;

Comment GreyOwl
07 Feb 2013
What? It just end at the Wonderbolt Event? What about the other events?

Review Cherry
07 Feb 2013
Is there anyway to not go with Dash? It breaks the game ;n;

Review Steven Bruman
06 Feb 2013
Umm... is is fantastic i'll give you 4 but when the map is fixed you get a total of 5

04 Feb 2013
This is a really great game, but i must ask, how come when rainbow dash wakes me up, i got a message saying the game has ended?

Comment ReignOfTerror
03 Feb 2013
Where can I find Rainbow Dash? I wanna talks with her

Review alora
03 Feb 2013
i need to take lessons from you. you are very good at this sort of thing.

Review Andrew Noyes
01 Feb 2013
Hay umm if some one could help me out in game when i have to give any of the ponys some thing the command bar does nothing ive check to muke shure i did every thing right and i did and stills does not work i tryed downloading it but when i got the map the quest app crashes every time my email is [email protected] plz contact me (ive had this email for a long time is plz ingnore the odd name)

Review Exceed Shc
31 Jan 2013
Friggin AMAZING! I can just visualize my OC Sun Dream walking the streets of Ponyville. I was really sad though when I saw the "Game Over" sign on the 14th day. But I did do everything before that, so im cool.

Review Nicholas2
30 Jan 2013
I love this game. Can't wait until chapter three is finished! Keep up the good work

Comment Harvey2
28 Jan 2013
How did you put in the time and day?

Review Kamil
08 Jan 2013
The Mrs. Cake quest is bugged, after handing Mr. Cake the Jar of Something, you can talk to Pinkie Pie to have her be happy about your help and improve your relationship... but you can do that as many times as you want as long as you don't leave the building. I got the numbers up to 160 before I decided to do something else, which was return to Zecora to find that you can also actually re-complete the quest later by getting another Jar of Something, and then giving it to Mr. Cake again (even though he isn't still there).

The Saving Spike battle seems to save your progress if you fail, which may not be a bug since the battle also seems unreasonably difficult otherwise.

Less on the technical side of things: There is a general lack of instruction or even hints at the times where there is only one possible action to be taken, so some roaming around and trying all of the buttons is necessary (fortunately, this also doesn't seem to be detrimental to completing anything). More personally, the options you have to respond when Twilight Sparkle asks how she can repay you are... in my mind extremely out-of-place, and limiting (though the outcome is fine).

Review DevilBrony
07 Dec 2012
Awesome Game^^

Comment jason5
24 Nov 2012
what is the first command you use im stuck

Comment Etho
12 Nov 2012
@Katy

Type in, "Give Jar of Something to Mr. Cake."

That should do it.

Review Etho
12 Nov 2012
It's an excellent game except for some minor glitches and grammar mistakes here and there.

Review Xyore
05 Oct 2012
This game is very amazing. I could tell there's a lot of work being put into it. Would you, by any chance, like any help? I'm not an expert at coding, but I could try to help you in any way possible. If no, than that's okay. I still like the game and am recommending it to a few friends of mine. Keep up the good work!

Review Katy1
29 Sep 2012
How do I give the Cakes' the 'Jar of Something'?

Review Brandon19
21 Sep 2012
I'm loving this! This is great!

Review zach10
13 Sep 2012
its fun. twilight is fairly obtuse though... it means it.

Comment legionbrony
29 Aug 2012
Ahm, the stat bonuses for unicorn and academic don't work, I think...

Comment Klondikekun
27 Aug 2012
@JDMAN
yes I am. I'm working on chapter 3 right now which is the first big event.

@lolzr
Yeah I didn't think about that. Thanks.

@Sera as old as the project is. Its still ridiculously undone. Chapter 2 is the only thing done so far. I'm still working on it. I'll try to keep you all posted but I'm trying to find out about saving the games so you won't have to start over each little time I update.

Comment JDMAN
26 Aug 2012
Are you still working on this game?

Comment lolzr
22 Aug 2012
mybe u can upload amp on flickr or something and make the map a link to that

Review Rainbow Dash
19 Aug 2012
This was so awesome! :3

Comment Sara6
14 Aug 2012
Hey excuse me but I'm kind of stuck,you know,nobody is interacting with me differently every day is same and nothing is moving,I mean I have no quests I have the work at Raritys store but I just come there work and leave and next day is on. And I can't meet Luna anymore,I was at Celestias castle like three times but First time she told me about Luna than I had a cake with her and third time nothing,I'm desperate,this game is awesome but I'm on 34th day and,Fluttershy is not talking to me as there is written Fluttershys quest so HELP ME PLEASE, Idon't know what to do!

Review Sara6
14 Aug 2012
Awesome! But I only got to 14th day and Game is over is written up there,so what can I do?

Comment Devon1
07 Aug 2012
@JDMAN
That is were the game finishes if your a pegisi, I think.

Comment JDMAN
05 Aug 2012
Other than that I love this game and hope you continue

Review JDMAN
04 Aug 2012
Can someone please help me, the game works fine all the way up to the 14th day when Rainbow Dash comes to your window to take you to Clouds-dale. My game just simply freezes as soon as she arrives. Is anyone else having this problem? Do I need to hit a certain button or something because up to this point I haven't been able to find her anywhere or be able to do anything involving agility so I would greatly appreciate some support on this being that Rainbow Dash is my favorite.

Comment Omega
22 Jul 2012
This game is awesome, and I can't wait for it to be properly finished. I must say the map being broken is annoying, but then again I've played this enough to know my way around I love this so much. So even though the map may be broken, play it more! That's all I can say.

Review Livvy Rennie
21 Jul 2012
Good game, well done x

Review john35
12 Jul 2012
nicely done i liked it

Review ChaoticLaw
08 Jul 2012
Nicely done.

Comment Devon1
07 Jul 2012
I would like to see more on relationships, if you know what I mean...

Review Devon1
06 Jul 2012
This...is...amazing!
Keep up the good work!

20 Jun 2012
does anyone know of any fun games like this

20 Jun 2012
I love the game but I really want to know if there are going to be any updates soon there was one last month I think so if the creator can answer some of our questions that would be awesome too so far epic! rock on bronies!

Review tom12
20 Jun 2012
AWESOME! I CANT WAIT 'TILL U FINISH THE TACKLEINGS :)!!
BRONYS FOREVER!

Comment Roman
21 May 2012
Umm...My enter key is not working? Is anyone else having this problem?

Review lolzr
05 May 2012
i am on day three and i at granny's house and i talk and she asks what do you want. what do i say?

Review Omega
16 Apr 2012
It's good, very good. But I find interactions are limited, but that might just be you focusing on the story.

I thought if you weren't planning to add more stuff later on, then you'd think about it then.

Story wise it's great. And very whimsical humor, not over the top but enough to get a much deserved chuckle here and there. Keep up on this game becuase it's brilliant.

02 Apr 2012
when you're first in the supermare you have to sleep in the futon to get to the next day. i believe i'm on day 3 and i've finished everything there is to do. i got the tour from twilight, met everyone (fluttershy took my hat), partied and slept. the next day i taught class for cheerilee and slept. after that day i could buy a ticket to canterlot, where i met celestia and a hooded pony, both who wouldn't talk to me. i also found i could enter the everfree forest where i met zecora. finally i bought an apple from sweet apple acres, but haven't been able to give it to anypony. nopony else seems to have anything to say (rarity and fluttershy are missing). is that the end of the demo so far or has anyone else got farther in the adventure? i really want to continue this!

Review Yuuki
01 Apr 2012
I cant move.... I'm in the supermare and i cant seem to type anything in, I cant rate it well if im stuck

Review Lucy1212
23 Mar 2012
How do you use the map???

Comment Cadin
18 Mar 2012
i'm glad the game is fixed but why can't i see the map?

Review mapisbroken
18 Mar 2012
This is amazingly done ^^
Only the map is broken, and I'm imagining it would be pretty helpful ;_;
5* only -1 for the map >.<
I hope to come back soon and give you the rating you really deserve.

Comment Roman
16 Mar 2012
i don't understand where does it end because i'm lost

Comment Cadin
06 Mar 2012
well, today I realized that the only working part of the map is that it doesn't let you go in but it lets you go out all you
want--fix the game.

Comment Cadin
05 Mar 2012
once the game actually starts i have no idea where to go. :(

Comment Maddy1
24 Feb 2012
The games broken, I have the same problen s Otaku. Fix it PLEASE!

Review Nameless
18 Feb 2012
Loved it. I hope more of it gets made.

Comment Otaku1995exe
16 Feb 2012
I can't continue when I begin again, I go north, south, east and west, and nothing, could you fix this?

Comment vhaun
09 Feb 2012
Broken even further now, klond. Please get it working, i was looking forward to playing this.

Comment vhaun
04 Feb 2012
Update broke the adventure.

Comment Hess
01 Feb 2012
I can't seem to see the map. Is there a reason why, my browser or its not there or something? I take it it is necessary to be able to see it or can I get by with out it?

Comment Roman
26 Jan 2012
Zerkai i think you should still try just dob't steal anything because as we all kno stelin is bad but also i would like to play your text adventure

Review Zerkai
26 Jan 2012
Oh man, was looking around for text adventure games like this, was planning on making one, but this is pretty much what I had in mind.

Review Roman
11 Jan 2012
hope you put up another update

Review Darquez
10 Jan 2012
Can't wait for the full game and how far are you on completing it?

Comment Roman
04 Jan 2012
I loved this game demo i can't wait for it to fully be finished

Review Otaku1995exe
28 Dec 2011
So how much progress have you've made so far? I really want to know when you finish.

Review Jake2
26 Nov 2011
Oh yeah, rate it.....here you go, five stars for a fellow brony!

Comment Jake2
26 Nov 2011
HELP!! I'M TRAPPED IN THE SUPERMARE AND CAN ONLY PACE BACK AND FORTH!!!!!!! Help me please, oh and sorry for the dramatic part right there.

Review Miel
25 Nov 2011
Man, this is pretty cool.
Good job ;)
Hope you continue making more of these :3

Review sharon
06 Nov 2011
how do I take the tour with twilight? ive interacted with everything else and seem to be stuck on this?

Comment Klondikekun
30 Oct 2011
OH MAN THIS GAME IS SO OH MAN AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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