The game seems fun! There's a big time skip though from when your a kit to now being a warrior which confused me, but I think it has a lot of potential!
If you'd like you can check out my game over here!
https://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/qbheiqjcvukkxc6l0rdhxa/warrior-cats-dawns-horizon
It was alright, I loved it but I think this could be super good if you update more. In my opion, less choices but more to the storyline is more important but thats just me.
My story is here and the 1/3 is almost finished. I have one or two more updates and then I'll edit everything. Can you check it out and leave a review/comment? ty
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan-part-1-3