Mouse Quest Chapter 3 - The Council of Mice by bryan-graphics

Comment Amadea

Nice job on these games, I enjoyed them and would love to see the story continue. It was great to have some humor, like the "jimmy," and helpful hints like how the guard says that a brave mouse may gain entry to the tower. Just some things that you might want to correct:

Chapter 1:
When you look at the mother mouse it says "note loose sight." Change note to not.

Chapter 2:
When you are at the patch of leaves where Gumbo is playing his banjo if you look at the leaves it says "The leaves were from above and fell into the pit when you did." which doesn't make much sense, especially since it says this even before you enter the pit. A misplaced object?

when you are at the muddy slope it says "the lily pads is south." Can you change this to "the lily pads are south?"

Chapter 3:
>use dull staff on cheese
"You can't reach into Steps to Elder's Hall."
Kind of a funny message there.

I don't know if you want to change this one, since "throw pebbles" works, but:
>throw rock at cheese
(first taking rocks)
You are already carrying pebbles

After the farmer leaves the inn it still says he's there in the room description.

The mirror sold by the vendor says it will never "brake." Change this to "break."

When the protagonist is reading the elder's letter it says "doom all our family's," change this to "families."