Knight's Of Constant Time by IAmJD

You play the role of a newly promoted G.O.T (Guardians of Time) Knight, who gets stuck within his choices in a war between himself, and time. Your decisions affect his relationships, and his personality. Shanes life depends on it.

[This is my first game, and hopefully I did good. If this go's well, there will be a second. This game is rather longer than few, so prepare yourself for immersion into critical thinking. Enjoy!]

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Comment Text_Quester

27 Jun 2018

I will hold off on the review for now... I am not sure if English is your native language, and we all make mistakes, but these games ARE "read" as it's main focus of game play and they should be as well written as possible. Even in the first few choices there are either spelling mistakes and places you should clearly have "were", but instead have "where", meaning the word wont be caught in a spell check, but it is the wrong word entirely.

You also have capitalization where it is not needed, such [The Lt. --->Ran<--- a hand through her hair. "They left it --->their<--- for a reason, Raines. Don't you think --->theirs<--- something else to it?"]

It should also be "there" and "there's" (Maybe "theres"), but certainly not "their" and "theirs".

I am not a grammar and spelling Nazi, and I make mistakes too, but again, the only way to play this game is through reading and we should be able to read it without all the mistakes. Although the concept is an interesting one, it is a hard read. If you can fix all or the majority of the mistakes, it would be much better. Good luck!

Review Khobotov

01 Aug 2016

Ok for a first try game, but no own ideas