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Its really a -5 but the lowest I can give is a 1 soooo yeah.
This is a website for text adventures with choices. There is no real choice to this. Bad grammar and spelling as well. Pointless options. Its very cliche. Soilent Green anyone?
If its a demo state it in the title or at the beginning of the game. Decent idea, but you didn't really do anything with it. Its more or less just words with no importance. Good idea, but you need to do something with it.
Its a decent story. It has no choices or real interactivity to it though.
A gamebook is suppose to have decisions that affect the game. Also this had no 'rivalry' of any kind unless you messed up the page link.