I really enjoy this game, both in concept and in practice. The farmer sisters are great, and the whole 'training regimen' idea is creative and can potentially lead to a lot of different possibilities; since Piper is reluctant about some of the more severe violations of the MC's privacy and dignity, there could be a plot thread where she refuses to allow you to be harmed like that (while still treating you like a pet, of course); if you're too uppity, she might either lose interest in you or stop caring too much about your wellbeing, meaning that Lilac could take the reigns and treat you much less mercifully.
I wish there was an option for your character's gender, but I understand that it's hard to do just in base Quest, so I can't really imagine how hard it would be to do that in twine without copy/pasting entire paragraphs of text while also changing specific scenes to fit--for instance, the training scene part where the MC is violated with a stick would have to be changed for the male version (or at least, it would have to be a different hole being violated). Interactions with other characters might also have to be changed slightly, so it'd be a hassle to try and catch all those little snags. I'm trying to do the same with a little work-in-progress project of mine, but I need to be capable of using advanced settings in the downloadable version of the program, so I understand the pain.
I really enjoy this game, both in concept and in practice. The farmer sisters are great, and the whole 'training regimen' idea is creative and can potentially lead to a lot of different possibilities; since Piper is reluctant about some of the more severe violations of the MC's privacy and dignity, there could be a plot thread where she refuses to allow you to be harmed like that (while still treating you like a pet, of course); if you're too uppity, she might either lose interest in you or stop caring too much about your wellbeing, meaning that Lilac could take the reigns and treat you much less mercifully.
I wish there was an option for your character's gender, but I understand that it's hard to do just in base Quest, so I can't really imagine how hard it would be to do that in twine without copy/pasting entire paragraphs of text while also changing specific scenes to fit--for instance, the training scene part where the MC is violated with a stick would have to be changed for the male version (or at least, it would have to be a different hole being violated). Interactions with other characters might also have to be changed slightly, so it'd be a hassle to try and catch all those little snags. I'm trying to do the same with a little work-in-progress project of mine, but I need to be capable of using advanced settings in the downloadable version of the program, so I understand the pain.
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