Seriously could you add a bit more also Cats can hunt rabbits in every clan not just Windclan and your mentor wouldn’t reject you for trying to catch prey. One other thing try update it and make it so you don’t get banished for warning the clan about something you think could be a threat! SO...
I can't read the text and its super short. Maye if you fix a few things it is ok. But all the reasons aside, you should read the books, or know about it. My game here ( work in progress) has a description for kinda what happens including on what I added because I believe medicine cats should legally have kits and mates. I update frequently ( at least once a week.) maybe you could check it out or really anyone who reads this XD and tell me what you think.
Really short, apprentices do not be one warriors because they are short on them. If you were just a warrior you really won’t be deputy. Work on details more and maybe re read the books to see how they really go.
Seriously? By warning the Clan of a potential danger you aren't exiled or, 'banished.' This is very, very poor. I'm sorry, but, come on do you even read any of the books? Or do you just watch stupid videos or listen to like, five seconds of the audio book? ONE. STAR. ( Ah Wind Clan joke)