Survive Part 3 - Rivals by Ethan+22

Review by Rocketgirl13

This was well written I could imagine everything going on. This definitely evokes emotion in the reader or player.
(spoiler)
Although its not too satisfying that there was no ending evolving not dyeing in the end, This truly shows people should make the best out of one's life. Furthermore this story shows a lesson that even if the end seems near you should still not give up without a fight.
......or you know I'm getting too into it. This is what my English class turned me into.
This is a good story though. Looking forward for more of your work!

Review by mentlegen

the ending is bad and the choices dont do anything

Review by Dustylizard

It was fun but no matter what you do you allways die on the 5th choice

Review by alexfangtalon

A gamebook is suppose to have decisions that affect the game. Also this had no 'rivalry' of any kind unless you messed up the page link.

Review by Stryker

Its getting pretty decent.
Good Games , Hoping for part 4!
Good Luck DEVS

Review by TheWaltsu

This review is about full series, not just this part.

I liked the story, but it's too linear to be a gamebook.

Every part was very short and i know that you can do longer gamebooks too.

Idea was very good.

Only few choices can be made, and they dont even effect the gameplay.

Story: 3/5
Writing: 1/5
Idea: 4/5
Gameplay: 1/5

Game: 2/5
Good idea, but not very good otherwise.

Review by MisterPibb316

I definitely sense more effort in this one than Part 2, but the point of an interactive game is to give the player some sense of freedom over completing the game, even if there is only one ending, and there just isn't much 'game' here.

Review by TheScayn

Amazing and unexpected ending !
Only, this part is a quite short.
AWESOME !

Review by DaNiX88

The frustration I felt when I couldn't get the outcome I wanted....

Why did you end the series with ... that! I tried every possible outcome and wondered if there was a secret method to chose to get the desired outcome. I didn't want that one! I... I... I subtracted a star even though I think it was a quality game overall (including the first and second episodes).

I also have another problem. In this game, you almost completely leave out Jay and Colin. Like, what's up with that? I wanted to interact with them and because you have the title as "Rivals," I expected to have a certain rivalry develop concerning one of the characters, but I was mistaken. I can understand because this game feels like you weren't able to finish it. I hope you come out with a sequel or an update to this game.

Please?

PS. I tried editing this review to leave out spoilers as much as I could.

Review by Renagrade

Loved the game! The only issues I saw were some grammar and spelling issues as well as some obvious plot devices. Still though, I was totally enveloped in the game and I can't wait for the next one!