It should have better grammar. Overall, your word choice and context is marvelous, but the punctuation, spelling, and capitalization in the game isn't quite. Other than that, it's a good game. But, if only you didn't have to kill the dog.
It's a marvlous piece of literature! I escaped, of course. And that didn't end well. But I'll play it again and see how figuratively being a robot works out. Fantastic! Keep writing.
Some things I'd change, like a little bit of grammar mistakes. Otherwise, it was pretty nice. Not very perplexing, however. But I liked it. I never actually left wherever I was, the house of some sort. It was quite odd.
Very original. I like it, though I'm not quite sure what to do yet. I should probably finish the first one - which I never even read or did or played or heard of. Otherwise, your grammar and your phrasing and everything is marvelous. Well done!
I've yet to read the actual book, so perhaps that's why I'm so perplexed. I'm rating it 5 stars despite my puzzlement because it's my own fault I don't understand anything, and because it is very, very well written, and the grammar pleases me, as does the vocabulary. It was very well done.
Apart from many grammar mistakes, nice game!
Fun, but very difficult. Looks like you put a lot of effort into it! Well done. I like it. It's very descriptive, and entertaining.
It's amazing! One of the best I've played. Nicely done!
Very good and well-written. Amazing grammar, spelling, and phrasing.
Keep up the good work!
I love it! It's very intriguing.
Amazing cover art, amazing story, just simply amazing.
Very relaxing, much like the title suggests, and visualizable.
Keep it up!
It's an amazing game. Very well written. Good job! I haven't played much games that are this good, and I can see you've put effort into it. So far, this is the second game that scored a One in my list of best games I've played.
1. A Stranger Unregarded, and Lost in the Shadows of Time.
2. Deeper
3. (Nothing)
-4. Everything else
Amazing work. Just with one play, that lasted five seconds, I knew this game was worth 5 stars.
I'm not much good at it, but it's actually very fun! Good job.
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I got to be a sandwich! Just what I've always wanted!
Great game! :D
I like it. It's very simple but quite funny as well. Good job!
Nice, but very short. You should update it!
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