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Graphics style is attractive.
A notable error I find in a lot of games is "take" and "use" verbs that do nothing on objects that frankly shouldn't have them at all. Redd, a NPC in a capsule bigger than you, has a "take" verb. So does Robot.
Game froze at one point and refused to load.
Many typographical errors. No clear explanation of Blue's past.
Retyped and edited description. Hope this helps.
You are a small jellyfish, named Blue, in a big ocean. Dangers lurk in every corner...And a terrifying MutaMara, much bigger than any creature in the ocean, is hiding, waiting for a chance to attack the wise old leader, Blue Whale. Amazingly, you have been named 'The Chosen One' and it is you who must stop the MutaMara's attack...But how can one tiny jellyfish stop the most dangerous and biggest creature ever...? (If you don't know the game Seashine, you should give it a go! It can be played on a phone/iPad) Explore the depths of the ocean and discover hidden secrets...THERE IS ONE WAY TO WIN! There's going to be another Seashine game soon... 😉
Please see my comment. Many objects have take verbs that do nothing, including some enemies and buildings.
There is no clear indication where Jade is, and no easy way to heal.
However, the base of the game is okay, it just needs some fine-tuning.