Last Dawn by nate2273

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The end is near as the last survivers leave earth. You awake like any other day but you notice strange things the sky the grass and the air. Little do you know that the end of the world is near.

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Review PrincessOfHorror

23 Mar 2018

Work on grammar and WHY things happen, also more choices.

Comment nate2273

03 Jun 2015

And again forYukonymous text adventures are for fun and it seems you like to attack people for every thing they are worth. Heres my review of you.

nice 1/5

negative 5/5

Ability to enjoy any short storie 1/5

so thats my thought of you since you show no fear in telling your side of the storie. And attacking a guy in the comments because he made a dumb comment not cool. Get a iife!

Comment nate2273

02 Jun 2015

and no im not populer because of you or any one

Comment nate2273

02 Jun 2015

And as for the Star Wars game I am making it and if there is something you would like to see in it please tell.

Comment nate2273

02 Jun 2015

Thank you for the review and remember i am still working on it. All grammar will be fixed and you said it seemed unreal remember its "sci-fi" for a reason.

Comment b0bbert

02 Jun 2015

no i just REALLY LIKE ME SOME STAR WARS

Comment Yukonymous

02 Jun 2015

@b0bbert.
Don't act like people are popular "cuz of you." You probably sit at parties alone. If you're even invited...

Review Yukonymous

02 Jun 2015

At least it has a story. Here comes my review.

GRAMMAR 2/5 - I just quit after the first few choices. I can't play a game with mistakes unless it is intentional.
LUCK 1/5 - I noticed you find a Mustang in a ditch on the side of the road or something. What luck is this? And why do you automatically steal it?! Because of rain? What has kindergarten become of you!
STORY 1/5 - I like how a little storm causes devastation. lol.
ENDING 1/5 - It exploded? Damn. Oh well. About ten minutes of my life gone. You know, you can't actually live on Mars without food brought from Earth. What'cha gonna do? Eat a rock?
OVERALL 2/5 - Could be better. Just make it more realistic if this happens. And I like how a storm caused you to live on Mars. lol.

MESSAGE TO OTHER REVIEWERS: Don't review if you haven't played. You can ONLY REVIEW ONCE EVERY GAME.

Comment b0bbert

01 Jun 2015

Now on the science fiction category you're popular cuz of me....

SO WORK ON THE STAR WARS GAME

Review b0bbert

01 Jun 2015

I HAVENT PLAYED THIS YET BUT IM GIVING YOU FIVE STARS SO U CAN REMEMBER ME AND HOW YOUR MY OWN WEE HOPE [4 the star wars game]

Comment nate2273

01 Jun 2015

Please comment and tell what you think or if you think something could be better.